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[laeladair]

Restitution ~ Chapter 8
It's done.  I just have one last decision to make as to where the cutoff for the chapter's end is going to be.  It's...so...hard.  The beta-readers should have it by today or tomorrow.

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[_sapphiredreams]

Hey! Well, my most recent things going on with me I posted in the blog before last. I had been avoiding getting all that out there. Oh, and I did the interview. :) Do you watch Grey's Anatomy at all? I know, I know, random comments. It's just that I did this friending meme thing for Grey's Anatomy friends. It was weird since I'd never done anything like that before, I tend to be selective in my friends. But I don't really have the heart to say no to anyone if they ask, which a few of them did. I hope that I end up liking and caring about them as much as I do with my other lj friends. *hugs you* ;) It's a little weird. But there's only one person that I ever defriended so I guess my odds are pretty good. (I just couldn't take the junior high flavor of her blogs anymore.) :P How's it going with your volunteering and the girls there?

[_sapphiredreams]

Okay, so I'm re-reading "Deep Within" and the last line of this little paragraph...

He didn’t have long to wait before a broad smile burst forth on the girl’s features. Within seconds an innocent glow replaced the bored frown she had been wearing only moments before. Clark was shocked at how suddenly she was able to suppress her horrible attitude beneath a pleasing façade. He wondered a little uneasily if all women were capable of doing that.

...made me laugh so hard when I was drinking that I spit water out of my mouth. It's just so funny. I can just picture Clark's uncertain/uneasy expression. Farm boy. :P

[_sapphiredreams]

Men in Black

[laeladair]

Ding ding!!! Winner!