Harry Potter & The Children of the Night

Nov 10, 2005 17:40

Harry Potter
The Children of the Night
-by Lady Nichola Valerius
Previously, on Harry Potter and the Children of the Night:“Faster, Harry, time’s almost up.” Harry, tired as he was, used every ounce of his energy to move faster to get his goal. CRACK! “Yes! That was great, Harry!” Vidar cheered as Harry fell tiredly onto the grassy lawn. Vidar ( Read more... )

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uten November 16 2005, 16:15:15 UTC
Very nice chapter. The only thing I thought was wierd was that the 'cylinder' is cold, yet it had been inside Emera long enough to almost bring her to orgasm, and they are in a warm shower. Why is it cold??? I notice the oddest of details ( ... )

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You're right! ladyvalerius November 19 2005, 01:20:49 UTC
Hmm...I guess you're right...It does clash with everything I wrote doesn't it? I did mean to say that the cylinder was cold because it was made of metal...I guess the description was somewhat vague now that you pointed it out...Heheh...Well, I'm glad you like it. I'm actually not aiming for an HPHG ship, but this story was made at the request of my cousins, Cheska and Desiree. Their usernames are 'Eris_Dea_Disaccordo' & 'Dezziey' and their profiles can be found at FF.Net. Oh Gods, I sound like a commercial...So anyway, thanks for reviewing!

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