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[ladysorka]

I tried to write y'all porn. Ended up with this instead. Which has a rather lack of porn.

Buffy Wishverse, Oz/Giles/Larry. Didn't do anything to it besides spellcheck it - if you feel this could actually turn into something and want me to edit it, drop me a note?

Comments

[carlamlee]

I'm really, really bad with feedback, but I just wanted to say that I really liked this. It's a nice little bit of a story, I loved the Oz characterization, and I'd love to see more, if you ever write more to it. Good job. :-)

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[ladysorka]

Thank you. *s* I'm not sure there will ever be any more to it (was a bit of an off the cuff drabble), but I may try.

But, thank you. ^_^

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[carlamlee]

you're welcome

[rensong]

Yes yes, good fic. I already told you this, but I saying it again... ::applauds::

{{{hugs}}}
~ maren

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[ladysorka]

Well, thank you again. *g*

[chickwithmonkey]

Ooohyay. I like Oz. I like Giles. I like Larry. I like triads. Basically, I like this piece. Because they so would. Would you blame them? And the family thing. Very much so.

Very, very good. I don't think it needs any work, but I never edit my own stuff either, so use your own judgement rather than mine.

[simplelyric]

if you feel this could actually turn into something and want me to edit it, drop me a note?

I like it and would enjoy reading more (or seeing this polished, if that's what you had in mind), but I don't think it needs to turn into a Great Big Fic or anything. It's interesting & good as is. Also, your Oz voice works really well.