Fic: The Sound of Wrong

[ladysonsie]

Title: The Sound of Wrong
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Rating: R
Word Count: 780
Disclaimer: These characters? Not mine. Just borrowing to play with, thank you.
Summary: Noah learns what the right touch can silence.
Author's Notes: Written for nukeminibang 2013. Thanks for letting me throw this in.

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Comments

[sarahsezlove]

Wow!
This is just so powerful...

'Sounds in his chest fighting against the sounds in his head. Loud, searing, heavy thumps pounding away in all parts of his body. Crushing the worthless, the nothing of before. Every touch that was wrong, every bellow of an angry man that scared a little boy silent.'

Beautifully done.

[ladysonsie]

Ah, thank you so much! You're very sweet for quoting as well. Happy you liked it!

[appassionata1]

Brilliantly written insight into the mind of a tortured young man.

[ladysonsie]

Oh gosh, thank you. What a special thing to have you say, I really appreciate the comment.

[123cariad]

So many emotionions .. sadness , fear , lust , content , happiness , hope ... absoulutly brilliant x

[ladysonsie]

Lovely! Thank you so much for all the wonderful words! Super happy all that came through and thrilled you enjoyed.

♥

[daan73]

intense and powerfel the struggle the feelings ended in the love of the same
thanks

[ladysonsie]

Beautifully put. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

[cindyls1969]

God, I can't even imagine the feeling of always being wrong until you find the then that's right. This story is breathstealing. I could feel my heart beating with Noah's!

[ladysonsie]

Ah such a lovely thing about your heart beating with Noah's! And I know - the fact he ever thought things were "wrong" always makes me sad.

But thank you again for the comment and so happy you enjoyed!