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ladysonsie

Fic: The Moment Before

Aug 10, 2010 01:23

Title: The Moment Before
Pairing: Luke/Noah
Rating: PG
Word Count: 300
Summary: Noah kisses Luke and loses himself in the moment.
Spoilers: Nope.
Notes: Hm. Well, not entirely sure where this came from. Intended to drabble some kissing. Which this is. Just a little different than I had imagined.

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( He loves taking that small second, that single heart beat to speed up his pulse, blood thick in his veins racing. )

luke/noah, fanfic, drabble, atwt, writing

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ladysonsie August 14 2010, 19:18:29 UTC

Aw, thanks so much! ♥

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ladysonsie August 14 2010, 19:20:06 UTC

Thank you! What a sweet comment. And I do enjoy down and dirty smut as well (yum, heee) but I love these moments, too.

These boys - always good at giving both! HEE.

Thanks again! ♥

ritalaura2000 August 10 2010, 13:36:30 UTC

you have a way with words

GREAT

Thanks

ladysonsie August 14 2010, 19:20:30 UTC

Oh, gosh. Thank you so much!

brighton_girl August 10 2010, 13:41:48 UTC

Wow, really beautifully written, and a very sexy kiss.

♥

ladysonsie August 14 2010, 19:21:34 UTC

Thank you so much! The kissing was fun to write. <3

samson79 August 10 2010, 18:05:54 UTC

I am a big fan of kissing so yeah....
this was pretty much perfect ♥♥♥

ladysonsie August 14 2010, 19:22:52 UTC

Yay! Thank you. Kissing is not something I write a whole lot so I'm really happy you enjoyed it.

Thanks for the lovely comment! ♥