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ladysonsie

Fic: How to Get to Home

Nov 01, 2009 23:19

Title: How to Get to Home
Pairing: Van/Jake
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,753
Warning: RPS with a teeny bit of angst I think.
Disclaimer: Everything you are about to read is not real. Fiction, kids. Which means I'm just one big liar. So no offense meant and ohmygod don't sue, plz! I kinda like my things and want to keep them, kthanx.
Summary: Jake ( Read more... )

rps, fanfic, adult, van/jake, writing

Comments 44

didde120 November 2 2009, 11:35:36 UTC

So sweet. Loved the ending!!

ladysonsie November 4 2009, 02:43:24 UTC

Thanks so much!

indigo_5 November 2 2009, 11:49:00 UTC

Um, hi. I am in love with you. That is all.

Except it's not, because OMG STEPH WROTE RPS!!! And it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. Not that I am surprised, because everything you write is that. But it still needed to be said. Because, fuck. This was heartwrenching and beautiful and emotional and sexy and hot and perfect and oh God, that ending.

Just yes. That's all I've got. YES.

YES.

♥

ladysonsie November 4 2009, 02:48:13 UTC

Ha! That's a very big 'yes'! Hee. And thank you so so much! GAH, you have no idea how stupid nervous was about this. Well, you prob. do actually having already done the RPS thing. It's like, I love reading it but writing it? That was something else entirely.

And thank you for the ending stuff. I sometimes write that first (I'm weird I know) so I'm glad it all worked. You're the best, hon. *squeezes you*

♥

ltklo November 2 2009, 14:06:33 UTC

Wow! And again, wow!

I love how you used Van's smile to convey how Jake was feeling about their relationship. And your description of Jake's emptyness and need was heart-breaking.

ladysonsie November 4 2009, 02:50:21 UTC

Oh, thank you! I'm so glad Van's smile came across like that, that's totally what I was trying for. So yay! And thank you so much for the sweet comment! ♥

miss_smp November 2 2009, 14:57:48 UTC

Your talent has no bounds!!!!!!!! <3....That was BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!! <3

.....oh and what Rachel said!!! :D

ladysonsie November 4 2009, 02:53:58 UTC

Hee. Thank you so much, Steph! You're way too sweet. <3 So happy you liked it!

crownroyal_51 November 2 2009, 15:06:35 UTC

Loved this! I've been dying for some Jansis! The ending was perfect because the boys belong together. And the sex was very hot too!

ladysonsie November 4 2009, 02:55:34 UTC

Yes those boys do belong together if only in my pretty pretty mind. HEE. So happy to fulfill your craving and that you enjoyed it! Thank you so much!