Forever Love, Inc. - 10/12

Sep 29, 2011 08:20

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nancygrew October 5 2011, 07:42:25 UTC
I just love when Noah is such a complete asshole in fics! He's so entertaining and actually in character.

Love Luke reminding himself that he was Lucinda's grandson. Love that he was about to be brave enough to put himself on the line with Reid.

Suspect that Reid is angry with Noah inst of w Luke for blowing his story!

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aljc100 October 5 2011, 10:20:49 UTC
This was superb stuff - I particularly enjoyed the scene with Reid and Luke on the bench, and how you alternated each line of dialogue with a gesture or movement from one or other of them. Really nice touch!

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marsabi October 5 2011, 13:33:59 UTC
Ugh-Noah!

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shar_jere October 5 2011, 16:20:53 UTC
I feel bad for Luke but I am not shock it's time for Luke to take out the effing trash.

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joann414 October 5 2011, 16:27:37 UTC
Angry Luke, and douchebag Noah. Hopefully, Reid is not mad at Luke, but at Noah for his insults to Luke.

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