Comments | ladyrhyanne: Fic: La Petite Mort pt.2

ladyrhyanne

Fic: La Petite Mort pt.2

Nov 30, 2010 17:51

Title: La Petite Mort pt.2/2
Pairing/Characters: Sam/Dean
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Incest, guy-on-guy sex, swearing
Spoilers: Major plot spoiler for Season 6
Word Count: 13,122 (total)
Disclaimer: Don't own - just playing in somebody else's sandbox.
Summary: Nobody said that any hunt was easy but Sam wasn't expecting this kind of curse, hell he never even ( Read more... )

prompt fic, wincest, sam/dean, slash

Comments 44

katbcoll December 1 2010, 05:47:57 UTC

WOW! It just.... Ohhh gods, I... *flails wildly* WOW! *flails more*

ladyrhyanne December 8 2010, 18:11:52 UTC

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

katsheswims December 1 2010, 06:31:36 UTC

Wow. Very nice.

The end was very hot.

There were a few minor grammer things.

It would be interesting to see a kind of coda to this to see how it turns out.

Keep up the good work!!

ladyrhyanne December 8 2010, 18:16:05 UTC

Thanks.

Oh I'm sure there was more than one grammatical error. Unfortunately my beta's computer gave up the fight and died and I couldn't find anyone else who had the time to look this over for me.

I'll see about a coda, I kind of have an idea but not so sure yet...

Again thanks for pointing out those two glaring errors in part one for me. Ends to a means...good grief!

deadflowers5 December 1 2010, 18:08:22 UTC

I really liked it! It was sexy, and fitt with the pictures.

ladyrhyanne December 8 2010, 18:16:42 UTC

Thanks.

I'm glad it was worth the read.

dont_hate_me01 December 1 2010, 20:04:55 UTC

This was amazing! Thanks for sharing. A sequel will be in order, please!!!

ladyrhyanne December 8 2010, 18:18:28 UTC

Thanks.

And thank you for reading and commenting.

Sequel. Sequel? I know not what that word means...you're not buying it either huh? ;) I'll see if I can come up with something.

meus_venator December 1 2010, 23:34:11 UTC

I loved the slow dread way Sam found his way to this answer.

The whole piece seemed written in a grey mist surrounding just the two of them.

I'm left with this overwhelming sense of sadness.

Dean is the monster now.

My heart breaks a little for both of them.

ladyrhyanne December 8 2010, 18:19:58 UTC

Thanks and I'm sorry.

But thank you for reading and commenting.

meus_venator December 8 2010, 18:27:39 UTC

Oh, no, no no, I don't mean to make you feel bad. I meant this in the best possible way, I was just trying to explain how I felt reading it. I loved the story. I loved where it took me. It's just how I felt as I read it, there seemed to be a mysterious grey haze isolating the two of them even though they were in a vibrant little town. It was very serene and still.

I love that great writing can just take me somewhere else.
It was a wonderful exploration. I don't think everything has to turn out wonderful. Sam's going to make this the best he can. And yes, like others commented I'd love to read a sequel, see if Dean can stay somewhat on the side of light.

Sorry, I'll have to be more careful in how I put things. Postings don't contain your feelings, just what your write down and I thought this was a great read.

ladyrhyanne December 8 2010, 19:30:05 UTC

Oh don't apologize, this is all on me. I'm suffering from insomnia and if you've ever been overtired you probably know what it's like. It's not so much that your comment bothered me in fact you got the mood I was trying for, just that I felt bad thinking that I made you feel bad reading it. *sigh* I hate being tired, it makes me stupid and emotional, I swear it's almost as bad as being pregnant. ;)

Anyway, I am glad that you liked it.

Wait, did you hear that? I think I hear my coffee maker calling my name...I'll just be over there if you need me.