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greeneyelove January 13 2008, 02:01:40 UTC
I've missed you!!!

This was wonderful.

"Dad...no..."

The blue lips part, a breath of air escapes, a coughing gasp, and one of the EMTs feels for a pulse, announces they have one.

Tim breathes as well, his a sob of gratitude.

I could hug the boy right there.

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ladyoneill January 13 2008, 02:59:14 UTC
I've missed writing so much! I just hope I can keep it up.

I love writing Tim. He's so broken. I'm sure the comic won't go in this direction but I just had to show Tim's reaction.

Thank you for the feedback!

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ladyoneill January 13 2008, 03:00:22 UTC
Thank you! I love to write Tim especially when he's all dark and angsty and hurting. Poor boy needs therapy!

Glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it.

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arch_schatten January 14 2008, 22:49:15 UTC
Augh, I forgot which issue this was! Jen said 'Look at it!!' and I was sucker punched by the Timmy-pain! (I love being suckerpunched by fic!)

This was awesome. Love the last image you paint, with the ears of the teams on Tim... poor, poor Timmy. He needs therapy! and a hug! and another hug! *pets him*

A woman's voice breaks into the comm, one he hasn't heard for a while, giving him instructions, clear, concise, the tremor of emotion only heard because he feels it, too.

I loved your Oracle+Robin moment. Barbara might not be in Gotham right now, but she and Gotham are as OTP to me as Bruce and Gotham, and it felt very right to have her be the one to pull Tim back together enough to face this.

Awesomesauce!

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