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darkdanc3r September 3 2007, 18:24:59 UTC
The first one was lovely. Made me think that maybe Slade wasn't lost after all.

And then you wrote the second one. And I cried. Damnit, Slade.

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greeneyelove September 3 2007, 20:42:53 UTC
The first one was great, no doubt, but the last...ouch. That was wonderful in it's hurt and how hoepless Slade felt, to be driven to that point.

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coldfiredragon September 3 2007, 20:57:48 UTC
The first one had that little bit of light tinting the edges and then the second just hurt. I feel so badly for both of them and can't help but wonder what Dick's last thought was.

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blackrosebard September 4 2007, 17:51:23 UTC
The first...yes, remorse is a good emotion to still feel.

The second...Sometimes I think my brain needs disassociated from the muses I try to write, because I could hear Slade all grim and gritty in my head at the tale end of that.

So very good with both of them.

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realpestilence December 21 2011, 03:28:04 UTC
The first one's like, "Oh, there's hope yet"...and the second one is all "OH NO THERE ISN'T!!!" D:

Very powerful writing, and beautiful, in an appalling way. lol

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