Comments | ladyofthesea: Of gods and mischief

ladyofthesea

Of gods and mischief

Jun 23, 2012 16:18

As per the joint Loki discussion between destinare and I, I decided to tidy up what I have of my 2011 NaNo project, Tainted, and post it for the interested. Part of me can't believe it failed that year; the good news it can be rescued. I will do my best to see it done. Enjoy! :)

( Tainted, part one )

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destinare June 24 2012, 00:28:16 UTC

The entire time I was reading this, I kept thinking of Pride and Prejudice and Sense and Sensibility. I love the language you used in this and I already have a strong connection with Catherine. I adore her nickname of "Kitty" and I wonder now if it will be used later in the story.

I also really liked how you started in the afterlife and then took us to the beginning so that we can get the full story of how this story came to that point. I've off to read the other parts!

ladyofthesea June 24 2012, 16:59:12 UTC

Being compared to Jane Austen totally made my day. :D Im so glad you are enjoying it. I had forgotten how well written it was; hard to believe I lost my focus. Fear not- it is making a comeback. ;) I dont have internet or Skyrim to distract me this week. Perhaps I will have something to show for it. :)