Awkward morning are the best ever, at least in fiction, and oh, that was just so. Terribly. PERFECT AND TEENAGE.
My absolute favorite line has got to be this:
His hair is a mess and he looks like he has a crick in his neck, and he just stares at Ais and Ais doesn’t quite know what to do with himself because the staring makes him remember things from last night and that makes his face heat up and his stomach contract.
Because this is. Yes. My terrible kink is those little awkward 'argh, I'm thinking of something embarrassing and it's making breathing kind of hard' moments. It seriously, seriously is. I have the most awful soft spot for that kind of thing.
But omg thankyou. XD I loved this. Just the wording and the gingerness and the clothes-lending (LAWL I HAVE A KINK FOR WEARING YOUR PARTNER'S CLOTHING TOO) and the little almost-shy smiles at the end, just just just.
Whee, I made you happy! Now my day's work is done. ^_^ Seriously, though, I'm glad you liked it. I wasn't sure how well it came out, and kind of had doubts about the awkwardness level being sufficient, but... it worked out in the end, apparently.
Teenage first-time-related awkwardness has to be one of the best things to put in fiction, what with the randomness of intensity and goofiness that ensues. And yeah, I'm compensating for the fact that I never got to wear anything of my boyfriend's while we still dated. That sucked ass.
And heavens know I've got enough kicks out of your stuff to require that I give something back, too. Hehehe.
I please real easy. XD It turned out pretty well, in my opinion.
WHEN/IF I GET A B/F, I AM SO STEALING HALF HIS WARDROBE. :V Srsly. This is one of the kinks I have that crosses over for het and slash. XD Until then, I also compensate. Cough.
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This just made me.
SQUEAL.
Awkward morning are the best ever, at least in fiction, and oh, that was just so. Terribly. PERFECT AND TEENAGE.
My absolute favorite line has got to be this:
His hair is a mess and he looks like he has a crick in his neck, and he just stares at Ais and Ais doesn’t quite know what to do with himself because the staring makes him remember things from last night and that makes his face heat up and his stomach contract.
Because this is. Yes. My terrible kink is those little awkward 'argh, I'm thinking of something embarrassing and it's making breathing kind of hard' moments. It seriously, seriously is. I have the most awful soft spot for that kind of thing.
But omg thankyou. XD I loved this. Just the wording and the gingerness and the clothes-lending (LAWL I HAVE A KINK FOR WEARING YOUR PARTNER'S CLOTHING TOO) and the little almost-shy smiles at the end, just just just.
D'aww. ;o;
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Teenage first-time-related awkwardness has to be one of the best things to put in fiction, what with the randomness of intensity and goofiness that ensues. And yeah, I'm compensating for the fact that I never got to wear anything of my boyfriend's while we still dated. That sucked ass.
And heavens know I've got enough kicks out of your stuff to require that I give something back, too. Hehehe.
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WHEN/IF I GET A B/F, I AM SO STEALING HALF HIS WARDROBE. :V Srsly. This is one of the kinks I have that crosses over for het and slash. XD Until then, I also compensate. Cough.
Thanks again, though. ♥
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