If the Devil Wrote Poetry - C1

Sep 18, 2011 22:10

A/N: My other computer is broken, which is the only reason why I haven’t updated ‘In the Shadow of Albion’ yet. I really need to invest in a USB device, seriously...*shakes head in shame*

Title: If the Devil Wrote Poetry
Rating: M
Pairing(s): Ludwig/Feliciano; includes Antonio/Romano, Roderich/Elizabeta, one-sided Francis/Feliciano, etc...
Length: ( Read more... )

swearing, romance, gerita, humour, italy, violence, hetalia, germany, smut, adventure, spain/s.italy, france, alternate universe, angst, spain, germany/italy, south italy, nc-17

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junkyjacktires September 19 2011, 07:49:07 UTC
I really like this story. I wonder, will the next chapter have Ludwig and Feliciano meet?

Can't wait, keep it up!!!

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ladyofpride September 21 2011, 01:24:24 UTC
Oh, they sure will, and it'll be a meeting to remember *laughs manically--coughs*... Ahem.

Anywho, thanks for the review, darling. It warms my heart to see such a lovely reply. I hope the fic continues to pique your interest! ;D

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i_lovejs September 20 2011, 22:36:10 UTC
Great story so far. I'm actually excited for the next chapter.^^

But there's one little typo in it. It's "Jawohl" instead of "Jawhol". I hope I don't come across as a know-it-all.^^°

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ladyofpride September 21 2011, 01:26:00 UTC
Not at all, my dear. I actually miss quite a few things, even when I take care to edit it properly, and I really do want feedback on mistakes, even if it's just for spelling or grammar.

In any case, thank you so much for reviewing! I hope you continue to enjoy the story! ^.-

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umeyume September 21 2011, 03:25:46 UTC
Doooo keep writing, I loved it! (And when I say that, I really mean it, 'cause it's hard for me to really like any Hetalia fanfiction these days.)

The characters are all, err, in character, and lovable, and Gilbert manners and speech is just RIGHT, and Ludwig/Romano/Feliciano's line of thought and behavior are just what you expect of them in these situations.

Really, I'm waiting for someone to draw a doujin on this fic or something.

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ladyofpride September 22 2011, 23:01:20 UTC
Aw, you flatter me, hon *blushes*. I'm glad to hear that the characters feels as though they're actually "in" character, because if there's one thing that drives me nuts, it's an excess of OOC. XD

Also, I'm glad that you're just plain old enjoying it. I know how it feels to take a beating from your fandom when some of the fanfiction out there doesn't seem to be up to snap.

Anyhow, caoi for now, darling! ;D

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Wahha sparkyz2002 September 22 2011, 20:21:08 UTC
I really hope you finish and post soon! It's been a while since I've come across a really well written fic. Please don't abandon it!!

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Re: Wahha ladyofpride September 22 2011, 23:02:35 UTC
Thank you, my dear! I spend most of each day studying, but I make sure to put an hour or so aside before bed to write a little. I really want to get this one all out there in the world, so expect another update soon! XD

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pagesbam November 1 2011, 23:29:49 UTC
Terrific work! This is the type of information that should be shared around the web. Shame on the search engines for not positioning this post higher!

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