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Quicksand, 1/13

Aug 12, 2009 02:45

Title: Quicksand
Authors: herohunter and ladydreamer
Pairing: Clex
Rating: Generally PG, and NC-17 in parts
Warning: mpreg
Summary: One cold November evening, twelve years after Lex Luthor left Smallville and Clark Kent behind, the two meet in Centennial Park… as Lex is walking home with his daughter.
Thanks to our beta lexalicious, and to lapetite-kiki for the beautiful cover for the fic.

( The cold November air nipped at Lex's ears as he walked through the park with his daughter Athena, he in a dark purple coat and hat, and she in green. )

clex, lex luthor, clark kent

Comments 12

jlvsclrk August 13 2009, 22:38:45 UTC

I'm in love with Athena! Such a charming girl, and I love how she's testing her abilities and scheming to find her father someone suitable. I'm so intrigued by all the little details you've thrown in here, like Lana and Tina being together, or the little tidbit about Desirée being the catalyst for Clex being together. I smiled like a loon when I read that the guest room was red - Lex must have been subconsiously designing with Clark in mind for that to happen. Can't wait to see where this goes next!

ladydreamer August 14 2009, 06:26:36 UTC

Hehe. I'm glad people like Athena. :) The Lana/Tina was totally Ash's doing, and yeah, Lex definitely kept his farmboy around! Thank you for reading.

greenlady2 August 14 2009, 01:30:07 UTC

This is great. Love it. I was just in the mood for a long, Clexy story, that fixes all the bad things about SV. Thanks. Off to read part 2. :-)))

ladydreamer August 14 2009, 06:27:45 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad it hit the spot!

maigie2010 August 17 2009, 06:43:03 UTC

Loving this story. I am enthralled with the dynamics and Athena is wonderful.

Tiny error I caught:-

Clark smiled at father and son; (that should be daughter, not son)

ladynhero August 17 2009, 06:47:14 UTC

Lol. Thank you. That's a bit of a difference!

And thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying her! :D

helva2260 August 22 2009, 18:27:47 UTC

I love this already! I got to the part where Lex called Athena his "little migraine", and realised that *grins* of course Lex would call her Athena, there could be no other choice! Though I did spend the next couple of minutes wondering if it was a more literal reference, and how Athena being born from her father's skull would actually work... but even for Smallville that would probably be a bit too wierd!

ladydreamer August 23 2009, 01:52:45 UTC

Haha. Yeah, that would probably be too much for Lex! Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed Athena and Lex's relationship.

lexophilia May 19 2010, 21:22:47 UTC

I can't believe that I'm just now finding this story. It's absolutely wonderful.

ladydreamer May 19 2010, 21:24:53 UTC

Heheh. Well, I'm glad you found it! Thank you. We enjoyed this one, too.