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ladymond

You saved me (16/?)

Feb 08, 2012 11:21

After the long hiatus here is another chapter for “You saved me”. I apologise profusely. I promise I won’t take that long to update.

Once again I owe a lot to crystalkei for her work as beta and also to cemeterydreamer for reading the chapter and giving me pointers. If you haven’t read their work you are missing out, so do it soon.

None of the characters belong to me (with ( Read more... )

mitchell/annie, fanfiction

Comments 10

mylittlestorys February 8 2012, 21:26:43 UTC

Woaza, that was some returning chapter! Very interesting direction. I can see what Annie was trying to do, but yeah, it has to be down to Mitchell to sort himself out. Love protective George. Can't wait for the next one so please don't keep me waiting too long lol!

ladymond February 9 2012, 00:45:48 UTC

Already working on the next one!

Yes, I had most of this chapter ready but I needed courage to finish it and post it. It's hard to make Mitchell go bad, but this story was born out of a handful of scenes I couldn't shake from my mind and this is one of them.

Thank you for commenting, this is what keeps me writing.

Have you written anything lately?

wonderfulmoody February 8 2012, 22:16:20 UTC

This is great, I wish this really happened in Being Human. I hope Mitchell will control himself and Annie doesn't give up on him. I can't wait to read more of this. :)

ladymond February 9 2012, 00:47:24 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting!

I wanted Mitchell unraveling but obviously in a different way from what it actually happened.

Thanks again!

liwa14 February 9 2012, 04:04:51 UTC

This is amazing.
I can't wait to read the next chapter.

book_junkie007 February 9 2012, 04:22:21 UTC

Yay for George being protective of Annie, and forcing Mitchell to save himself!

Annie was trying too hard in the show to save Mitchell, and Mitchell was trying too hard letting the others save him, if that makes any sense.

saemay February 11 2012, 08:00:51 UTC

It is perfect. Everything in Mitchell leads to an unraveling of his tightly wound psyche of guilt and control. That is part of the beautiful and alluring tension between your version of him & Annie. Because she does have the power to recognize it and guide him. But I loved the protective George - I could "hear" him perfectly taking a stand for Annie.
Sincere thank you for continuing the story - I'm even more eager now to find out how it all plays forth.