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ladymirth August 10 2011, 04:34:30 UTC
Thanks, hon, and welcome! Yesterday, some idiots from the Dengue Prevention Project dropped in unexpectedly and gawped at my brother when he got excited and started stimming. I was so angry and depressed that I just sat down and wrote this. It felt more like a narration than a poem to be honest, and I meant it more as a catharsis than anything of literary value. But people sure seem to have liked it! I've since tweaked it a bit, although the meter still looks wonky. Thanks for the feedback!

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pgwfolc August 9 2011, 12:40:27 UTC
Beautiful, in a bittersweet sort of way. He's lucky to have you.

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ladymirth August 10 2011, 04:35:27 UTC
:) Thanks.

T minus two weeks till we're on the same continent! *dance*

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pgwfolc August 10 2011, 04:40:04 UTC
Wooo! Of course, I'll be out of town then, but technically closer to Canada. Spending the latter half of August with the family in MA. Hmmm. I wonder if I could take a side trip on the way home. Just a little out of the way...

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ladymirth August 10 2011, 04:44:17 UTC
No point, really. Orientation starts two days after I land and I'll be moving into college after that. So best wait for the holidays.

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beansideirae August 10 2011, 20:10:38 UTC
this made me all teary eyed. how old is your brother?

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ladymirth August 11 2011, 11:54:50 UTC
He's fourteen and low functioning autistic, which means he has the mentality of a toddler.

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