Drift

Sep 06, 2010 18:58

Title: Drift
Fandom: Doctor Who
Characters: Eleven
Word Count: 394
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I own no Who, as usual.
Summary:  It’s so quiet he’s certain the silence will kill him if the lack of air doesn’t get him first.  
A/N: Written for Challenge 3 at whoverse_las
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eleven, doctor who, math, fanfic

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promethia_tenk September 7 2010, 18:40:04 UTC
Oh, Doctor.

Beautiful and sad. And there's this crystalline quality that some of your fics have--austere and precise--that I love.

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ladymercury_10 September 7 2010, 19:58:36 UTC
Wow, that's such a wonderful compliment. Thank you!

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honeynoir September 7 2010, 20:07:56 UTC
I adore this! The language is simply beautiful, as is the imagery.
(And my inner Doctor/Romana shipper squeed!)

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ladymercury_10 September 7 2010, 20:40:44 UTC
Thank you muchly!

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jennifergale September 25 2010, 06:50:48 UTC
Just lovely.

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ladymercury_10 September 25 2010, 13:01:28 UTC
:) Thank you.

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lonewytch December 17 2011, 22:37:31 UTC
*sigh* lovely again. I'm over wordy, and i struggle to express things succinctly when i write, so i've got a lot off appreciation for short pieces that really nail it like this.

I got a real sense of his loneliness. Your last lines are always stellar!

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ladymercury_10 December 17 2011, 22:40:32 UTC
Oh wow, that's a really great compliment to get. Thank you! :D

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redjaywrites September 7 2012, 05:46:27 UTC
The Doctor + linear time is like the most difficult, wonderful relationship ever. I love how you've used the Ponds to get that to work. A really great character study as well and I agree with all the other posts, you are the Queen of endings.

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ladymercury_10 September 7 2012, 07:32:26 UTC
Oh wow, thank you so much! I always worry that I'm screwing up the endings of things, so that's wonderful to hear!

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