I need some grammar help and I made the mistake of posting this to Yahoo Answers first. God, I love some of the people over there...
Okay, I'm doing an initial edit of my novel (which I feel I should avoid since it's not even done, but find myself doing it anyway) and I am wondering if this is grammatically correct. The novel is in first person, so
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And I am super intrigued. :)
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Oh and in the part "mind at ease for at least for a little while" you might want to get rid of one of the "for"s. ;)
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These are the things that happen when I copy and paste too much, lol.
As far as the commas, I'll have to change that. I go kind of crazy with commas on a first draft.
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