I Have Seen The Moment Of My Greatness Flicker

[ladymacbeth922]

Title: I Have Seen The Moment Of My Greatness Flicker
Word Count: 1358
Rating: R for language. Pardon my French. And Jack's
Pairing: Jack/Georgina,Blair/Chuck hints of Blair/Jack.
Summary: Obsessions are bred of nothing and lead to nothing on the Upper East Side. They are no exception.
Title from T.S.Eliot's Prufrock.

Comments

[vinniebolzano]

well my commenting...... i dont think i am enabling anything........YET
very well done i must say you explored areas most us wouldnt dare to tred near georgina and nate? soon ul b doing rufus and georgina u never know!
"He might just have a fondness for women his nephew’s had..." i like that
somehow things coming full circle sounds very appealing sort of like a modern day happily ever after because there cant be any other plausible one with them two
*applauds*

[ladymacbeth922]

Our icons match.

No,Rufus/Georgina but thank you. I dont think I've ever sworn this much in my life. Not on paper (if you will) at least.

[horrorparties]

I really hate Georgina, but you wrote her really well, which made it easier to tolerate her with Jack (whom you wrote perfectly). More Jack stories!

[ladymacbeth922]

Oh, I'm rather fond of Jack as you know. And Georgina,too.

Im glad it worked for you.

[cynicalshadows]

I love Jack, and this was just great. He is such a creep and yet so sexy. Good job pairing him with Georgina.

[ladymacbeth922]

Thank you. They're lack of morals match, don't you think?

The Basstards icon- how apt!

[jenepel]

Wow, I wasn't sure what to expect but I really liked this. I never would have thought of them together, but they are kind of equally self-destructive.

[ladymacbeth922]

I am glad that you enjoyed it. Yes- equally self destructive!

[la_faerie]

Wow, I had no idea what to expect from Jack/Georgina ( a ship I hadn't considered) but this really suits them.

+ Your characterization of Jack is perfection. So delicious. And he seems to have just the right amount of self-awareness.

+ Your writing style is lovely! Your descriptions of things (syllables tripping down spines) are beautiful. And Jack definitely smiles like the Cheshire cat. ;)

+ I really like that the Chuck/Blair is oblique. The few glimpses you show of them are so tantalizing!

+ Love the nod to Eliot. I think the Bass men would like that poem.

All in all, gorgeous writing, darling! Merci for sharing.

[ladymacbeth922]

Thank you! I wanted to keep C/B very subtle.

And yes, I think Bart and Jack both have Prufrock potential. Chuck, too, with his reluctance to say those words.