Beginning at the End

[ladylioness]

Spoilers: None.
Pairings: Parker/Hardison
Rating/Warnings: G
Word Count: 525
Author's Notes: I was doing some drabbles for Paradox-o-Rama and since I was just trying to bang them out, I did a set of 'Baby's First.' Then I said to renisanz, 'You'd know what would be cool? Baby's First Locking Picking.' Thus this odd little fic was born.

Comments

[renisanz]

Sorry for the delay. Had to do work and stuff. :/

It's a nice start. It alludes to parts of the story, little diversions along the way, and my mind is all omg, I so want to see what Parker is like while preggers. She is definitely put out once she's too big to fit into her climbing rig. ^_^

Do you know where this is going?

[ladylioness]

I'm not sure it's going anywhere. It may just be a grown up drabble. It may be similar to the supersecret fic I have yet to finish. I dunno. Maybe it'll be circular and it'll end before they get on the plane to Tokyo.

Actually, I kinda like that. Need to ruminate.

[renisanz]

I like that idea, too. So you mean that the rest of the story will be a flash of the future to come? That's cool.

[renisanz]

Alec read that mixed raced children do better surrounded by a variety of people.

This line has been bugging me, and after mulling over, I realize it may not really be necessary, considering the info provided in the sentence before it.

ETA:

Kayla grows up learning the family business.

I really like this line. It shows how close the team is and how important "the job" has become.

[celtic_flicka]

I really like this! Not just the shippy content, but the story structure is cool and interesting too.

[ladylioness]

Thank you! It's a wonky little fic, isn't it? renisanz read an earlier draft and was all 'Where's it going?' My response was something along the lines of 'I...don't know?' After a bit, I decided on this. Thanks for commenting!

[klutzy_girl]

Awww, I loved this fic!

[grlgoddess]

This was adorable! I love the sort of twisted structure!

[deepbluemermaid]

Ooh, interesting! I haven't seen this kind of futurefic for Parker/Hardison before. I'm a sucker for kidfic, too :)