Comments | ladylight: Mini-Challenge: Trap

ladylight

Mini-Challenge: Trap

Mar 23, 2007 01:41

Oh, yuck. So that's why I don't do monologues.

( Words of a Wight - 340 wd. )

cochalyon, iron hold, fae, challenge

Comments 22

hyarmi_records March 22 2007, 15:19:15 UTC

Yikes, that's ghastly! Poor thing. =(

ladylight March 23 2007, 01:01:55 UTC

I think it's fairly obvious why I changed my mind around 300 words ... thanks for reading, I'm sure it was just as unpleasant to read as it was to write :/

shanra March 22 2007, 15:34:19 UTC

That was incredibly hard to read. But very, very tragic. (You're much better at the minds of the insane than I am, truly. I thought Kpanti was bad.)

Poor lad. Just makes you want to bundle him up for a cuddle and end his pain and sorrow both at the same time, doesn't it?

(And that's all the sense I'm worth today, I think.)

ladylight March 23 2007, 01:08:10 UTC

(Are you calling me a nut? O_o)

I was actually going to add a bit more information about Espayon, Tathrinnas and those guys - past musing sorts of things - but in the end it was all too miserable and I just threw that hasty end in there.

And this is the exact reason I don't do Iron Hold shorts with Cochalyon. There's nothing light or gloom-relieving for the poor man, and I can't write those sorts of things. At least Arathalian has a relatively normal life.

*hugs* Thanks for wading through that ... I got back to Cochalyon/Seithenyn today and felt, er, much better O_O

shanra March 23 2007, 09:26:29 UTC

(If you were a nut, I imagine you'd taste quite lovely. ^-~ Depending what kind of nut you were of course. Not all chestnuts are edible and such things.)

I don't blame you for feeling better after writing pre-Hold Cochalyon. I thought for me the saddest bit was when he mentioned Arathalian. *cuddles Cochalyon* When am I going to get my snippet anyway? ^-~

(And if it helps any, I felt much happier writing little Von than I've felt writing any other Von. He's so cute as a kiddie.)

ladylight March 23 2007, 13:33:11 UTC

Hazelnut ... walnut ... mmm. *pores mournfully through cupboard*

For Cochalyon alone I'm sure Arathalian's never going to forgive the Holders. *has been trying not to wonder about story endings lately* ;P

And Cochalyon and Seithenyn have been very naughty boys as I try to write, though they were better-behaved today ... I've got to get it done before I leave!

(He is adorable as a small muffin, yes ... and they're so much cuter when they don't like eating people XD XD)

Thread 7

saltnester March 22 2007, 17:38:20 UTC

An iron hold must be a lot like a shallow grave...I'd slip him a fragment of a mirror, for the light, and run...

ladylight March 23 2007, 01:10:41 UTC

He'd probably try to eat it. Wights are always hungry. Thanks for reading ... ack.

wispywillow March 22 2007, 20:48:36 UTC

...Wow.

You seem to have been bitten by the same Dark Bug that has nibbled on Pantha and me of late. ^_^

Very scary!

ladylight March 23 2007, 01:12:48 UTC

Hold-Cochalyon's been black from day one, which I daresay is why this is the second thing I've written about him in over a year. *hides*

Thanks for braving it, hon (but keep your bugs away from me! O_o *sprays*) ...

telyanofcelore March 22 2007, 22:48:04 UTC

What is it with the angst bug? It's contagious.

ladylight March 23 2007, 01:13:41 UTC

Kill it! Kill it!

... ahh, too late, I'm coming out in hives ...