[SPN Fic]: A Love Story - T - 1/1

[ladyknightanka]

A/N: I saw the last episode and just had to write this. Thanks to all my love for Criminal Minds, I played profiler a bit with Jeffrey's past. Thanks to my tweeps for Jeffrey prompts. About time I wrote a canon-established couple, right? XD

Title: A Love Story
Disclaimer: I,

Comments

[shadownashira]

This was creepy and perfect and romantic in that let's-kill-people-together way. The way you write is gorgeous; the textures, sounds and images are vivid and almost tangible.

Now I want Baal and demon!Jeffrey to escape from hell and go on serial killing sprees topside, then have post-kill sex XD

I love how Criminal Minds-esque this episode was, and that there was slow dancing with a demon. And a whiny Lucifer. This show is so ridiculous sometimes, but I love it anyway :D

[ladyknightanka]

Thank you so much, bb. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the story and the more technical aspects of writing it. It was an unbelievable amount of fun, for something so dark.

I was reminded of Criminal Minds while watching, too. That was one of my favorite parts of Repo Man, along with the hugging, slow-dancing and Lucifer, of course.

I think I'll end up writing a sequel-ish thing with demon!Jeffrey and Baal wreaking havoc in Vegas. For posterity. XD

[dimensionallyt]

I loved this!

Creepily romantic indeed. It worked well. I felt a connection to all of the characters, including Cindy.

I wonder how long it took Jeffrey to become a demon?

[ladyknightanka]

Thank you so much! It makes me really happy that you enjoyed this, even the original characters!

As for Jeffrey... Well, Baal talent-scouted him for a reason. I imagine he would be something of a demonic wunderkind/prodigy and lose his humanity faster than average. You know, so he and Baal can honeymoon in Vegas while instigating a killing spree or two, lol.

[grlkat2]

BLUE SAID SLOW DANCING ON THE CRAPS TABLES. OH MY GOODNESS.

But I'm just gonna repeat what the others have said. I love how you used your little CM-mind to explain why Jeffrey's so messed up and how Baal just seems so right for him. Honestly, any other demon wouldn't have worked for him I think. And I love that you looked up what you could call the demon and have it so fun. It's so creepy and and SQUISHY.

YOU USED SQUISHY AND IT WORKED SO WELL.

At least, I feel it did. Especially in context. It just worked so well. Honestly, I think they should be thanking the Winchesters for shooting Jeffrey and exorcising demon the same day.

REUNITED AND IT FEEEEEELS SO GOOOOOD~

[ladyknightanka]

OF COURSE THERE'S DANCING SEX ON THE CRAPS TABLES! OF COURSE!

I agree. Blue calls Baal one true demon and it's really true for Jeffrey. I don't think any of the other demons we've seen previously could be his soulmate the way Baal is (and Baal is definitely my headcanon name now; if I write these two again, he'll always be called Baal).

I'm so happy you had fun reading this, bb. I had a lot of fun thinking it up and researching for it. They'll thank the Winchesters someday, as only married demons can. Maybe even someday soon. People keep asking for demon!Jeffrey rampaging Vegas. XD

THANKS FOR THE LOVE, BB! Squishy is a nod to you, as you know! *adores*

[ladyknightanka]

I wondered the same thing. Jeffrey was very fascinating to me. I wanted to analyze their relationship pretty badly. I'm glad you found it interesting, bb, but I think I'd get into a really weird place if I injected myself into Jeffrey's head for every single kill, lol. I might still write more, though. THANK YOU, MY LOVELY. *squish*

[antrazi]

Normaly I'm not one for romantic love stories... but then this isn't a typical story for that genre.
I have the desire to wish them both all the best for eternity, and at the same time want to scrub the idea of their preferred happily ever after from my mind

[ladyknightanka]

Believe me, bb, I understand. Their relationship is disturbing, but pretty powerful. As much as demons can care, Jeffrey's demon seemed to. He looked very pissed off when Dean shot Jeffrey, although he knew Jeffrey would only end up where he wanted him to in the first place (Hell), and I don't think anyone can dispute Jeffrey's devotion. At the same time, serial killer + demon can NEVER be traditionally sweet or romantic. It was fun to explore such a different mindset, though, and I'm glad you liked it. :D