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phreakycat December 17 2011, 01:41:06 UTC
This was great! I don't usually like crossovers, whith rare exceptions, but this blended the two fandoms seamlessly and it felt very natural. I liked seeing the Winchester's relationship from Mike's eyes, and of course the hurt!Mike and protective Harvey was awesome. Nice work, very well done!

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ladyknightanka December 17 2011, 19:09:31 UTC
Allow me a mini-fangirl moment? I love all of your prompts on suits_meme; they're always so epic and yield some of the best fics on it. Of course, they're so epic that I'd probably mess them up if I decided to write them myself, lol. Aaaannd I digress.

Thank you so much, bb! I'm really happy you enjoyed this and that the crossover didn't feel awkward. These two are probably my two favorite shows, so I wanted to do them justice. ♥

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phreakycat December 18 2011, 04:24:12 UTC
Aw, thanks! That's so sweet! I would love for you to fill one of my prompts - you're a wonderful writer!

This story was great - you totally did both shows (two of my faves, too!) justice! :)

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ladyknightanka December 18 2011, 19:01:21 UTC
Thank you again! I'm relieved that this story worked for you, bb, and I'll keep an eye out for one of your prompts that I hopefully won't bomb immediately! Also, yay for a fellow Suits/SPN fan! :D

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corsykitty December 18 2011, 22:48:18 UTC
First of all, the titles of your chapters. XD They caught my interest right off the bat. :D I read this the whole way through in just one sitting, was that good. Your Sam and Dean were so Sam and Dean! Harvey, with his badly concealed irritation over Mike showing up in someone else's hot car. Lol. Meg is totally my favorite baddie from SPN so I was very pleased to see her hanging about. The way they hid the truth from Mike was so very, very Winchester, and believable. The bit about Jessica dating Rufus was delightful and perfect (I got this wonderful vision in my head of her glaring at scruffy old Rufus just like any good old couple in a sitcom.) My heart was in my throat when Mike had that razor blade, and I completely forgot about Cas! Had no idea how you were going to fix it. XD The cutaway before Cas showed up to help was well-timed, it added to the whole monsters-behind-the-scenes feel of the thing. :)

Beautiful as always!

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ladyknightanka December 19 2011, 16:23:37 UTC
Thank you so much, bb! It's such a relief for me to hear that you enjoyed this because I know you're intimate with both shows, too, and I can rely on your judgment of the characterization! :D

I'm really happy you liked the Meg twist. I think she's one of the best villains on SPN, too, and I knew she'd pop up in the Winchesters' lives again. I wanted to keep the whole supernatural world curtained from Mike till the very end, to make relationships the over theme, with Meg being the one to shatter the illusion like she does so often in canon.

And the Jessica/Rufus! I was discussing this fic with one of my friends when she suggested Jessica would be great as Rufus' sister or something, which I thought was an epic idea, but since there's already so much about secret family members here, I decided to make them a past couple instead. After all, they'd both (bicker but) be up for it, I think. XD

Thanks again, hon. I can't wait to read yours! It's a SPN crossover, too, right? *brofist*

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_bluebells December 25 2011, 06:27:50 UTC
I loved this crossover. I had the joy of reading it on the sleepy, warm afternoon of Christmas day and it was such a gift ( ... )

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_nevergone January 7 2012, 04:41:33 UTC
I could have sworn I commented on this before, but when I came back for a second read, apparently it must not have went through..anyway! I absolutely loved this, all your characters were spot on, which I always imagined would be no easy task when blending two shows together, but you did it perfectly, so kudos on that. By the end I found myself inching closer to the screen, because, I'm weird and that's what I do when things get intense..and thank..well thank (Cas?) that Castiel showed up at the end!

I also loved that Jessica/Rufus were a couple. That's an amazing idea! I think they'd actually make a pretty great couple really, and Jessica would be a badass hunter too. Oh and the letter at the end..ahh, so sweet, and just such a Sam thing to do! May have gotten a little misty-eyed at that.

I'm so sorry for rambling and leaving such a scatter-brained comment. I'll stop now. This was perfect, lovely and you did a wonderful job with it. The end.

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ladyknightanka January 11 2012, 02:30:04 UTC
Thank you so, so much! I'm really relieved that you felt the characters and worlds of both shows fused well together! In a crossover, that's always my biggest concern, and these two are among my favorite fandoms, so I wanted to do everything justice. ♥

That was one of my favorite details, too. I really wanted more Jessica in the plot, because she is a goddess and AMAZING, but I liked the concise, mysterious quality of fewer cast-members and just couldn't. I HAD to add that, though. I could actually see it, too, and imagine her to be an awesome hunter, as you said.

Don't worry, this isn't a scatter-brained comment at all, it's lovely and really made me happy. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :D

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keitanketsueki January 10 2012, 22:33:18 UTC
The skill with which you wrote and assembled this fic is amazing. At the end of the second chapter, the tension was just high enough to bring that edge of worry and I couldn't figure out how the fic could be finished in one more chapter...

And then I read three and WHOA you just blew my mind. This is really just excellent! The slow revelation of Mike's condition after being posessed and nearly killed topped it of beautifully. Thank you!

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ladyknightanka January 11 2012, 02:56:54 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely comment! The suspense was a big part of the plot, since Mike never outright knows about the supernatural till the end, so I'm really glad it provoked you that way that the story felt cohesive!

Thanks again for reading! ♥

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