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[SPN Fic]: Pullin' Pigtails - T - 1/1

Oct 28, 2011 13:01

A/N: Once upon a time, there was a terrible, terrible author who promised to fill fic requests on a challenge for her birthday. She received one from a very lovely lass called la_mariane - the prompt of Sam/Gabriel that included Adam as a main character - but epically failed in fulfilling her pledge for nearly a year. Here is that terrible author's attempt ( Read more... )

character: gabriel (spn), character: adam milligan, word count: 5000-9999, pairing: gabriel/sam winchester, genre: slash, genre: total au, pairing: michael/adam milligan, fandom: supernatural, character: sam winchester, fanfiction: oneshot, fanfiction, character: dean winchester

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/nights_fang. Ignore the account was_angelcondom October 28 2011, 17:29:18 UTC

I am just in the state of being all "D'AWWWWWWW" and laughing. D'Awww over the cute (especially the brotherly bonding) an d laughing at Gabriel, and Adam, and that ending statement.

(Have I ever mentioned how much I love your ending statements? It's like a crack mini-fic in itself.)

Re: /nights_fang. Ignore the account ladyknightanka October 28 2011, 18:05:57 UTC

I'm so happy you enjoyed it, love! I really had fun with this AU! As for those mini-epilogues...those are fun to write, too. 8D

Thanks so much, bb!

mangacrack October 28 2011, 19:31:43 UTC

Nya :3 ... Michael is adorable! No wonder if his communication skills are a bit fucked up after he grew up in this family. Doesn't get better when he - as hormonal teenanger - falls in love with a Winchester. Cute!

ladyknightanka October 29 2011, 18:35:35 UTC

Ahaha, yes, Michael is not to blame - at least entirely. His childhood influenced him and Adam will have to deal with all the repercussions of that. XD

Thanks so much, bb! I'm so happy you liked this! 8D

la_mariane October 28 2011, 19:46:25 UTC

Your fic is not detestable at all, I think the various Winchesters are cute and Michael is hilarious. And Sam's reaction at seeing his brother kissing Michael was so great : "Please, tell me your brother is sexually harassing mine so I can kick his ass, throw him in a cell, then put this all behind me?”

Also, your ending statement WINS!

ladyknightanka October 29 2011, 19:24:54 UTC

I'm so relieved you enjoyed it, bb! I just feel bad that I somehow never noticed the second half of your prompt, even after so long. I think it's because I read it the once and thought I did it right then, but didn't really look after that because I had, if that makes sense. It's still embarrassing and taught me a lesson for next time. ^__^;

Thank you for the prompt, for being so kind, and for the lovely comment. I'm actually mulling over a sequel that focuses a bit more on Dean, to elaborate that mini-epilogue. ♥

la_mariane October 30 2011, 12:59:57 UTC

Don't feel bad, I really enjoyed this fic. And I love the idea of a sequel, because Dean can't be the only one not to get laid...

ladyknightanka October 30 2011, 17:29:06 UTC

It was initially my plan to include Dean and Cas more, but it sounded awkward that way, so I will definitely devote some time to that sequel and work them in. Thank you again! :D

zekkass October 28 2011, 20:51:37 UTC

Oh, that was wonderful - adorable in all the right ways, and I adore your Gabriel. Your Zachariah too, for all his jerk tendencies. <3

*spends a while quoting pieces of it at a friend over IM <3*

ladyknightanka October 29 2011, 18:43:51 UTC

\0/ Yay, I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I actually realized after I posted it that this is only the second 'real' AU I've done for SPN, so that was a nail biting moment. As for Zachariah, everyone loves a good villain. ;)

Thanks, bb! ☺

_bluebells October 28 2011, 22:57:09 UTC

Oh this was just precious. I love getting to see Sam, Adam and Dean live together as brothers and the nod to the difficulties Adam would have had as the new kid in town. Lawyer!Sam and Mechanic!Dean with Teacher!Gabriel were fantastic. I love to see how Suits helped you here with Sam's articulate lawyerly powers. XD

Lucifer and Raphael's united front to defend Michael from Adam was priceless. All the teachers. Principal!Zachariah. Michael pulling Adam's pigtails. So precious. What a great thing to wake up to.

And you always have the best epilogues.

ladyknightanka October 29 2011, 23:41:20 UTC

Thank you so much, oh love of mine! I really liked shaping the characters to fit into a new 'verse, especially because, being less dysfunctional than canon, they really get a chance to be bond with each other and other people more. It's because of you that Raphael is always BAMF!lady!Raph to me now. I love her. XD

And I had a feeling you'd like the epilogue. I say Dean gets the last laugh because I already have a sequel idea that focuses on him (and Cas, who is noticeably missing here) mapped out, in which he meets the Novaks. I hope I get the time to write it soon. >_<

Thanks again, bb! ♥