THE VAMPIRE DIARIES: A Footnote in History [1/1]

[ladyknight_fic]

Title:A Footnote in History
Chapter: 1/1
Author: ladyknight_fic 
Fandom: The Vampire Diaries (TV-verse)
Characters: Damon Salvatore, Elena Gilbert
Pairing: Damon/Elena
Genre: Angst/Drama
Rating: G
Summary: He hates that porch. Nothing good ever happens to him on it. If he's not kissing the wrong girl, he's being told by the right one that there's no longer room for

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[ladyknight_fic]

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[amj58]

This was really pretty. I'm glad you let Damon get angry and carried it from there. I especially like how it doesn't come off as forced - so natural. And Damon hating that porch made me laugh out loud.

Great piece :)

[ladyknight_fic]

I think Damon just really needed to get angry. Not angry enough to snap, a la 2x01, but enough to get all this out in the open.

LoL. If I were Damon I would loathe that porch. LoL. Nothing good ever happens to him on it. So unfair. ;)

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[panna_niesmiala]

So well-written, so in character, it's insane how amazingly you captured both of them. I can imagine this scene so easily. Great job! :)

[ladyknight_fic]

I'm still astounded everyone thinks I captured Damon's character. LoL. He's not an easy voice to get right, in my opinion, because he's just so distinct. But while I was writing, it felt like he was really steering the ship and I was just along for the ride, so maybe that had something to do with it. LoL.

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[safetywords]

You wrote so true to Damon and Elena here. It really strikes a chord with me how spot-on Damon is here about him still being Elena's friend even if she's not his. I love this unflinching honesty with Damon and how he puts himself on the line to tell Elena exactly how he feels. Love this. And it may be dialogue-heavy, but it works. It's not random conversation. It has purpose and meaning. Fantastic work. :)

[ladyknight_fic]

One thing I love about Damon is his loyalty. He doesn't have many friends, but if he likes, he'll stick by you. And I don't think anything could drag him away from Elena at this point, so it made sense that she's still his friend, even though he's not hers. It's a fine distinction. :)

I'm actually really proud of the dialogue here. My pieces are usually very internal, with dialogue used to highlight points and used sparingly. But this just took on a life of its own, and it works for the piece. :)

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[miss_blanche]

I really love this! Great stuff ♥

[ladyknight_fic]

:) I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting!