GLEE: One Moment in Childhood (When the Door Opens and Lets the Future In)

[ladyknight_fic]

Title: One Moment in Childhood (When the Door Opens and Lets the Future In)
Chapter: 1/1
Author: ladyknight_fic 
Fandom: Glee
Characters: Noah “Puck” Puckerman, Rachel Berry
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Genre: Friendship/Hurt/Comfort
Rating: T
Summary: It sounds corny, even in his head, but he thinks maybe this is the first time in months she’s actually seen him, Noah.

Comments

[chrisfaithalin]

I was glad somebody wrote a one shot with Puck responding to the whole Rachel mom thing. This was a perfect fit and I loved that it can technically be canon. Really great job.

[ladyknight_fic]

I wanted someone to write one too, but then had an idea for my own...except the story ended up completely different. LoL. And yeah, I love that it can be canon. I just think it's great when writers slip their own little stories into the bigger picture. :)

Thanks for commenting!

[andre_wellis]

This was lovely...but Puck was disturbingly mature, especially given his behavior previous to 'theatricality'. I kept expecting a hint of his own agenda to come through!

On the other hand, your portrayal of Rachel in her extreme vulnerability was perfect. The tone, timing, and voice of Rachel resonated, and overshadowed Puck. That was the only problem that I could find with this.

A wonderful piece, that was a joy to read, from the 'Lady'!

Keep 'em coming, bright eyes!

[ladyknight_fic]

Wow...you read a piece of my fanfiction. Strange, but cool. Why it's strange, I can't say exactly, but there you go. :)

Puck was mature in this piece but, in all honesty, I've always seen "Puck" more as a front. He's shown more honesty and vulnerability around Rachel before, so she gets to see "Noah." That's kind of what I was going for here.

I'm glad you think I got Rachel right, though. :)

Thanks for commenting!

[andre_wellis]

I just want to point out something here...

I always read your posts (usually about half a week after you posted them), but don't always comment - most often due to an inability to find the right words!

...not a good trait in a writer, I know. ;-)

[ladyknight_fic]

And now I'm self-conscious. LoL. I never show writer friends my fanfiction. I don't know why. Fear of ridicule perhaps, or not wanting to continually explain why I bother writing fanfiction at all when I have perfectly good original pieces I could be writing instead. Though I spend more time on originals, truth be told. No one realises, though, because I only ever put my FF online.

Anyway, I encourage you to continue commenting, but you don't have to "workshop" the pieces. LoL. I don't rewrite my fanfic. ;)

[7gifts]

I like this; it kinda had a bonnie and clyde feel to it.

[ladyknight_fic]

LoL. Really? First time I've heard that one. Haha. I guess it's good, though. ;)

Thanks for commenting!