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[ladykillertofu]

“Will you be here when I wake up?”

Álvaro is dreading the answer; fearing the rejection (which seems to be the only constancy in their relationship).

Fernando merely looks at him (or maybe he doesn’t. Maybe he is looking at his own blurred reflection in the other Spaniard’s eyes). Then he smirks, teeth shining brightly in the strands of

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[sophiamoon]

Sad, with a cruel undertone, and beautiful.

[ladykillertofu]

Thanks :) I'm happy I could get that atmosphere across.

[_unashamed]

Heartbreaking. But beautiful. *hugs Alvaro*

[ladykillertofu]

*sends hugs and cookies to Alvaro* Poor fella, but he'll be okay.

Thanks for reading :)

[kat_lys]

I feel so sorry for Alvaro!
But I loved it. I'm impressed by the feelings of sadness and coldness of the fic, by how you wrote and expressed them, and with using so little words...

[ladykillertofu]

Thank you so much. ♥

[txorakeriak]

*gulps* Poor Álvaro. :/ Nando really doesn't know what he's passing on here.
Intense, well-written and very touching story. I loved it - well, as much as I can love fics in which darling Álvaro is left sad, that is. *pets him* Definitely a very refreshing approach on this pairing, though. My compliments!

[ladykillertofu]

Ah, I feel bad for leaving Álvaro like that, just for the sake of a decent story.

Thank you for reading. I'm really, really happy you liked it :)