Fic: "In From the Cold" J2 AU rated-R Ch. 2/?

[ladyjanelly]

Not spamming y'all tonight, really. Okay, maybe I am, but here, have some fic?

Beta by Embroiderama, thank you so much for the bunny and the look-over.

As usual for my unpimped stuff, this is something I'm working on. If you have any advice or concrit, I'd love to have it.

More Homeless Jensen

Comments

[deathangelgw]

*fidgets* that's...want...yea more please?? *puppydog face*

[ladyjanelly]

Working on the next chapter now. Jen's POV> Heh.

[deathangelgw]

OOOoooooooooooooooo that is going to SO BE INTERESTING!!!!! *watches her avidly* you keep going...I'll just watch...

[ladyjanelly]

Heh. the lovebot!Jen leaves me speechless, so I don't blame you at all. That was so far from the fic I'd intended to write it's not even funny. Except it is.

Glad you're enjoying it. caretaker/patient isnt usually my thing, but I'm really enjoying building the dynamic here.

Glad to hear you enjoyed the rest of the stack of fic. I really need to make a better index.

[davidcrackin]

Another great chapter. I worry about this Jared, he is taking a huge risk bringing someone into his home like this, but I'd honestly have to say that I understand his motivation. Once again, you have me dying with anticipation.

[ladyjanelly]

There's just something vulnerable aboutJensen that he can't resist helping.

Jared figures he's not likely to suffer even in a worst case scenario. The size/weight/fitness differnece is enough that he doesnt think Jensen can hurt him, and it's not like he has anything worth stealing.

Glad you're diggin' it. Next chapter, Jen's POV>

[guard_the_cards]

I gotta say, having worked with the homeless before, it would take a lot more then one meeting with someone for me to bring them to my car and to more so bring them home. If Jared is completely nieve then this would work.

However, because of the story I can look that over, and it isn't jarring, in fact there is something about Jensen which causes Jared to trust him, and where I can see people breaking the rules for them. I know I had people who I broke the rules for, just not to that extent.

Basically, the story still works even if that in itself is inplausable because its needed to move the story forward.

I can't wait for more!!

[ladyjanelly]

Jared's halfway between innocent and over-confident on this. He doesnt see Jensen as a threat to his person and he doesnt have anything worth stealing so he doesnt really see how he can lose in this. Jared's 6'4" of cornfed guy and Jensen's maybe 140 lbs soaking wet. I'll have to remember to mention that in Jared's next chapter. Maybe in discussion with Jeff.

I appreciate the concrit. It's good to know what almost doesnt work.

Workingon Jensen's chapter now. :)

[elucreh]

Mmmmm. I was scared, a little, when you started writing this 'verse, because you are so capable of breaking me into little tiny pieces, but I clicked anyway...and I'm glad I did. I'm sure the shattering will come later, but right now I'm interested and purring like a cat at the thought of Jared taking care of Jen.

[ladyjanelly]

Appearances to the contrary, I see this as a relatively low-angst fic, as far as my fics go. Probably around scar!verse levels. Maybe a little darker.

Jared's such a good care-giver. All strong and supportive and stuff.

Glad you took a chance. I'll try to not break anybody.

[elucreh]

Well, the thing of it is, you break me into such pretty little tiny pieces that I sort of enjoy it. In a weird way. I generally avoid angst fics but you are one of the very very few who I can read and be scared and sad and then it's all...cathartic.

Gah. Forgive my rambling. Just know that I, you know, trust you. *G*

[ladyjanelly]

I'm flattered. I have a few authors that I'll read no matter what the warning is because I trust them. I'm proud to be on your list.

I do try to deliver a good kind of hurt and drama instead of meladrama.