Comments | ladyjanelly: Fic: Threw Away the sun 6/6 SPN AU Sam/Dean

ladyjanelly

Fic: Threw Away the sun 6/6 SPN AU Sam/Dean

Oct 21, 2007 19:26

Title: Threw Away the Sun 6/6
Author: Ladyjanelly
Warnings: Wincest, violence, a bumpy ride
Characters/pairings: Jess, Sam/Dean
Rated: NC-17 sex and violence
Summary: AU. Six months after John Winchester goes missing on a hunt, Dean Goes to Palo Alto to find a psychic.

( Chapter 6 )

tats, spn

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ladyjanelly October 22 2007, 03:25:00 UTC

Thanks. I'll take that as a compliment. :)

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ladyjanelly October 22 2007, 21:08:20 UTC

It's funny. I write a lot of different fics in J2 AUs. I write the same SPN story over and over (this is the only one posted). It's always Sam and Dean seperated young finding each other again. I started a hooker!Sam one and one where Sam was raised by Pastor Jim (Son of a Preacher Man). This is the only one where I found an end.

softgraysky October 22 2007, 01:41:04 UTC

Whoa....

I'm literally floored by how amazing this last chapter is, how you pulled everything together.

I may have to come back later and do detailed feedback. I can't quite think past wow.

fromyourashes October 22 2007, 01:42:24 UTC

*bawls*

You broke me.

Very Very Very hard.

ladyjanelly October 22 2007, 03:25:52 UTC

Awww.

embroiderama October 22 2007, 02:19:01 UTC

Wow, this is a really powerful ending. The description of what happened to Sam--gah! I just--I can see good reasons for John giving Sam up, but if he'd had any idea what would happen... It's terribly sad, but the two fo them together at the end feels like a good beginning.

ladyjanelly October 22 2007, 03:27:26 UTC

I'm sure John honestly thought he was doing the best thing for his son at the time. And I don't think Sam ever knew why John gave him up either.

I'm glad it feels like an open-ended probably-happy end. I like my bitter with some sweet, and wanted the boys to be happy after I'm done with them.

alchemie October 22 2007, 02:31:16 UTC

Heartbreaking. Absolutely heartbreaking.

*sniffle-cries*

I adore this universe you've created and I don't want it to be over. *clings*

ladyjanelly October 22 2007, 16:05:09 UTC

Aww. I'm thrilled that it touched you.

I really felt this was as far as I could write their story--I wanted to take it far enough that the reader could be reassured that the ending was happy, but after that I'd have gotten bogged down in the details of how it works out...