Comments | ladyjanelly: Fic: Threw Away the sun 3/6 SPN AU Sam/Dean

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Fic: Threw Away the sun 3/6 SPN AU Sam/Dean

Oct 18, 2007 13:52

Title: Threw Away the Sun
Author: Ladyjanelly
Warnings: Wincest, violence,
Characters/pairings: Jess, Sam/Dean
Rated: NC-17 sex and violence
Summary: AU. Six months after John Winchester goes missing on a hunt, Dean Goes to Palo Alto to find a psychic.

Notes: OMG. Okay. Special thanks to ( Read more... )

tats, spn

Comments 35

tabaqui October 18 2007, 19:31:04 UTC

“Dean,” Sam breathes, like somebody else might say “Oh, thank God,” and every muscle in his wiry body seems to go limp. There’s something about hearing his name like that; it strikes a chord in Dean. Yeah, he’s saved people before, it’s what they do, but the gratitude he’s received has always been so general, so “Thanks for saving us, whoever you are.”

Sam makes it feel like nobody but Dean could have made this right. As he settles back into deeper sleep, Dean sits on the edge of the bed and rubs a hand over his bony back and he’s not really sure why.

Oh, i like that. I like that there's a latent connection there, just lurking under the surface. Nice!

ladyjanelly October 18 2007, 22:19:46 UTC

The most interesting thing for me in writing this one was the way Dean responded to Sam--He can't help his responses, they just happen; it's instinctive.

And Sam breaks my freakin' heart.

elucreh October 18 2007, 19:54:09 UTC

Hah. Sam. I love you. Proving it, and that you know you won't die of it.

ladyjanelly October 21 2007, 01:19:47 UTC

Sam is so damn stuborn. This is another fic where I had to write a broken character by exploring their strenghts as much as their weaknesses.

yasmine32068 October 18 2007, 20:02:30 UTC

I am really enjoying this alternate reality... I love the hidden sub-text is still there even if its from Sam's perspective only!

ladyjanelly October 21 2007, 01:26:16 UTC

The first draft didn't have Sam's dreams in it and the fic felt very off-balance and Sam's actions seemed much less justified. I didn't want to write a true "Sam's POV" but I wanted to show shades of what his life is like.

elektrik_storm October 18 2007, 20:29:40 UTC

“If I am, I won’t die from it.”

It pisses Dean off more than a little that Sam sounds so sure, like Dean’s the last one to be let in on a secret.

“Never?”

Sam smirks. “Hardly ever. C’mon, I can ride again. We can’t fall that far behind schedule.”

arghhhh! i am loving this so much! :P

ladyjanelly October 21 2007, 01:27:01 UTC

Oh, Sam, stuborn in any world.

So glad you're enjoying it.

minim_calibre October 18 2007, 20:58:57 UTC

Wow. This Sam... yes.

ladyjanelly October 21 2007, 01:27:20 UTC

Different but plausible?