Okay, yeah, this feedback wasn't included in the deal, but damn I loved this! This was such a good combination! I love it! I don't know if you can do another one, this sort of rang finality, but if you do, I will read it!
Woah, I really like the beginning. The half dreaming half living thing? john being body snatched momentarily? Nice. Okay and Murphy's Saintly blood burning like acid? Genius!
Know what's funny? in an AU like this it's so much better that they're together. The twincest fits well in this demon filled world. Bathtub, heh. :)
I saw Constantine in the first flush of my BDS fanaticism. Ate the religious imagery up like candy. I tried to see who the boys would be in that world, how far I could take it. Still half-playing with a sequel in my head. Trained and experianced in fighting the living forces of evil? They'd be bad-ass.
When I wrote it, I didnt see the bathtub scene being post-sex. Even if they werent together I could imagine them being secure enough in themselves and comfortable enough with each other that they could share a tub.
It is really tricky to write them being with someone else. Together, they are such a complete unit. They are everything to each other, even when they aren't lovers. For another to come into their world is always a transient occurance.
"Wow" does not begin to be an appropriate response on this one. Just absolutely amazing! What a fabulous merging of two such dissimilar genres! And the characterization is perfection, as always.
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Know what's funny? in an AU like this it's so much better that they're together. The twincest fits well in this demon filled world. Bathtub, heh. :)
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When I wrote it, I didnt see the bathtub scene being post-sex. Even if they werent together I could imagine them being secure enough in themselves and comfortable enough with each other that they could share a tub.
It is really tricky to write them being with someone else. Together, they are such a complete unit. They are everything to each other, even when they aren't lovers. For another to come into their world is always a transient occurance.
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You, my dear, are a genius.
Love,
Julie-Rae
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I think I'll always have a sweet spot for the twins.
Mmmm, accents and guns and rightious!vengeance and naked on the floor wrestling for the phone and and and
Um, I'll be in my bunk. :)
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