The Sky Full of Ghosts 5/? "Mail order omega in space" AU

May 09, 2016 10:37

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mee_eep May 9 2016, 19:07:33 UTC
oops - I don't think I've commented once - sorry!
I tend to read in stolen moments then sometimes forget to return and comment.

I'm reading as original fic.
Guessed what would happen with Jordie, Jamie's behaviour since shows a good person.

This chapter, sad-sweet I liked the feels how they're clinging to each other for comfort and both facing their dreams but not quite ready to be happy, declarations of love would have ruined it, this felt more real and hopeful.

I'm liking it :)

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ladyjanelly May 9 2016, 21:22:01 UTC
This is sooooo just fancasting of original fic. I basically just needed the brother-bond to work with, or it could have been a lot of different 'actors'.

Jamie is trying sooo hard to be worthy of this precious chance that's fallen into his hands.

In my notes, this one was titled "Jamie and Tyler confess their mutual tolerance." :)

So glad you're enjoying. I'm trying to think if I've ever written space!fic before. One tiny Star Trek piece? It's definitely a challenge, and I'm glad it works as original fic.

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mee_eep May 10 2016, 22:10:26 UTC
I'm liking it :)

I like how careful Jamie is to give Tyler options, his way of honouring his brother and Tyler while cautiously daring to hope for himself.

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aubergineautumn May 10 2016, 05:15:59 UTC
Guh. So sad. The kitten was heartbreaking.

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