More's on the way. I am doing these in about 300 word bites. Keeps them from being stressful or tedious to write. I doubt it'll ever be all hot and heavy though.
I am not published, but thank you so much for the compliment. I took some influence from Andrew Vacchs for the "Look after your brother" series, but I didnt intentionally emulate anyone for this little set of fics.
Did you have any favorite lines in this? I always like to know what made the most impact when I put up stuff for public consumption. Any con-crit?
Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
You should be published. You could give A.N. Roquelaure (Rice) a run for her money. And, I am not comparing the two of you; I think your just as talented though. You are elegantly written, evocative and descriptive, though not in the extreme. Your characters are fluid NOT mechanical. You seem to convey, without effort, not only their actions but their thoughts and emotions. I have no trouble being drawn in to your story.
Heh. I keep wishing there was a market for gay romance written for women.
Glad my style works for you. I have two things I try to keep in mind. 1)write from the feelings. What they do is less important than why they do it. 2)show things, don't tell them.
Then I run that through a "is it important to the story" filter, and ta-da! done.
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And, Oh. It's all so comfortable and relaxing and sweet... Still the same sleepy, slow sort of feel to it, which is definitely a good thing.
Ah, I love this series. Just love the way you're going about it.
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It's so cool to be writing something happy and comfortable. Angst-free snuggle-fic.
Glad you're enjoying it. Flattered that it's one of your good things for today.
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I am not published, but thank you so much for the compliment. I took some influence from Andrew Vacchs for the "Look after your brother" series, but I didnt intentionally emulate anyone for this little set of fics.
Did you have any favorite lines in this? I always like to know what made the most impact when I put up stuff for public consumption. Any con-crit?
Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
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Glad my style works for you. I have two things I try to keep in mind.
1)write from the feelings. What they do is less important than why they do it.
2)show things, don't tell them.
Then I run that through a "is it important to the story" filter, and ta-da! done.
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