Fic: (untitled firefighter fic) j2 PG chapter 2

[ladyjanelly]

More firefighter fic.

Um, anybody have a suggestion for a title? Because I've been pondering for days and coming up with nothing.

Anyway, here, have some fic.

Oh, and also, that light silly feel I was going for? Totally gone. Warnings for semi-date-rape-something in this one.

Comments

[magikalrhiannon]

Go Harley! *I'm assuming it's Harley and not some sudeo-named dog in Harley's place*

Kinda wish he'd bitten him haha.

No idea on a title at this point, but I really wanna see more!

[ladyjanelly]

Yeah, it's Harley. :)

Although it being not-harley gave me funny little plot bunnies to play with for half a day.

[frostian]

How about Putting Out Fire with Gasoline?

It's from David Bowie song. Seriously, Jensen's having a craptastic day, no?

[ladyjanelly]

I've settled on "The Burn." Hopefully it won't be false advertising. :)

I would not want to trade days with this Jensen for anything.

Okay, well he got to touch Jared the day before, so that's a bonus, but he had to carry him so that's not-so-good.

[deirdre_c]

Harley defends the OTP! \o/

;D

I don't read all that many WIPs, but I am completely addicted to yours. It's almost more fun waiting, anticipating the next installment showing up on my flist. I can't wait to see what happens next.

[ladyjanelly]

Good dog. Yes he is. Awwww.

I love writing for serial publication. I always wonder how things hold up when people read the whole thing later.

[jellicle]

The dogs know what's best for Jensen, and it's not that asshole. :)

When will we get news from Jared, sweetie?

[ladyjanelly]

Definitely not. Good dogs. Treats for you.

Jared in ch 3. A little bit.

[realpestilence]

Fire With Fire...?

I'm going to go back & comment on both chapters later, I just realized I forgot to. *smacks forhead*

[ladyjanelly]

It's all good. I decided on "The Burn." Hopefully it won't be false advertising. I don't feel this being a particularly uber-sexy fic. Of course I sort of never do so I dunno.

[realpestilence]

To be honest, none of your fics strike me as uber *sexy*, even when you describe the smut in detail. They're sensual and sometimes funny, and always emotionally-driven.

Just you watch-the boys'll meet up & next thing you know, there's going to be charming banter, and Jared'll worry because Jensen could get killed in the line of duty, and Jensen won't be able to give up his profession because he *needs* to help people, and it'll cause friction but they loooove each other too much to stay away. And shit. I can see it coming, janelly! *laughs*

[ladyjanelly]

Nothing bores me more than a useless sex scene. If it isn't growing the boys closer or changing some aspect of the relationship or showing an internal conflict, I skim. PWP has no appeal to me at all anymore. So I try not to write what would bore me to read. My sex scenes these days are like a few lines and all about how they feel, not necessarily the anatomy.

I think I wrote better "porn" when I was 16.