Comments | ladyjanelly: Fic: "In From the Cold" J2 AU rated-R Ch. 18/?

ladyjanelly

Fic: "In From the Cold" J2 AU rated-R Ch. 18/?

Mar 24, 2008 16:11

Jensen talks to cops
Jeff watches cops
Jared worries. A lot.

Unbeta-ed pending Embroiderama's return to LJ-world.
Hope everything is okay.

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j2, homeless jensen

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guard_the_cards March 24 2008, 21:19:33 UTC

This is so complex and scary and I love it so much and there is so much I want to find out. And I"m just so glad you updated.

ladyjanelly March 25 2008, 17:30:47 UTC

OMG I don't think I've written anything so complex in my life.

One of the writer's workshops my husband's following says to just throw in random shit as the urge strikes you and it'll give you stuff to write off of later. that really works. Um. Except some stuff is coming together to a sorta-climax way earlier than the climax of the story.

deirdre_c March 24 2008, 21:24:20 UTC

Ahhh. I do love this story so. :)

ladyjanelly March 25 2008, 17:40:20 UTC

Awww. Thanks.

candygramme March 24 2008, 21:28:01 UTC

I have so much love for this Jensen, who knows just what he wants and who seems so very dignified, despite his scattershot language.

“Forever ever,” Jensen whispers. “If the man takes me. For memories.”

So much love!

And so much too for Jeff. Too bad that the ratpoison guy is still alive. I am afraid for Jared now.

ladyjanelly March 25 2008, 17:41:26 UTC

He's all discombobulated.

Shit meets fan in ch 20. OMG. I'm hurting my own brain with the way everything falls together from all the POVs. 4 completely different experiences for the same day.

thehighwaywoman March 24 2008, 21:29:11 UTC

I've so been looking forward to this. Very curious as to what will happen with Jeff (nervous about the "tall guy" reference) and the artworks Jensen makes are so fascinating, so intricate. Really love this AU!

ladyjanelly March 25 2008, 17:45:03 UTC

Thanks.

I really did strip phone cable once for copper to make art from. That stuff's so super-fine it's crazy.

Ch 20=shit+fan.

rednihilist March 24 2008, 21:29:13 UTC

Another great, wonderful chapter. I especially liked that Jensen got to talk to an "un-corrupt" female cop. And maybe the tests will show if anything can be done? Is Jensen going to get more of Davis back? I'm kinda with them on this one; I don't really want to know who he was.

Also, I'm worried that Jared is going to be implicated in the Mr. Rat-kill beating. . .

Great job!

ladyjanelly March 25 2008, 18:25:54 UTC

I wasn't trying to say chick cops were better, but I hadn't had a really good cop or a female cop yet and it just happened together. :)

The tests will take away some of the uncertainty. Give them all a definite direction...

And yeah. Um. shit+fan=ch 20.