Comments | ladyjanelly: Fic: "In From the Cold" J2 AU rated-R Ch. 11/?

ladyjanelly

Fic: "In From the Cold" J2 AU rated-R Ch. 11/?

Feb 12, 2008 11:50

Aftermath

Jensen is bored
Jared gets a call
Jeff deals.

My thanks to Embroiderama for the beta

( In From the Cold--chapter 11 )

j2, homeless jensen

Comments 97

beluga February 12 2008, 18:17:10 UTC

Ohhhh.. This verse is just getting better and better!!!
xx

ladyjanelly February 13 2008, 01:42:08 UTC

Awww. Thanks. :)

snowphilosophy February 12 2008, 18:26:06 UTC

I' so happy every time this is updated, it's such an interesting story. I'm really curious about what's wrong with Jensen. He's such a fascinating character and I'm enjoying getting to know him, one confusing puzzle piece at a time.

ladyjanelly February 13 2008, 01:43:14 UTC

I'm loving writing him. It's like this weird bridge between the left and right sides of my brain or something and I end up with huge numbers of words on the page.

Glad you're enjoying it. Love your icon. Awww, shy!

-J

ymmy12 February 12 2008, 18:33:35 UTC

love this verse
really-really love it

ladyjanelly February 13 2008, 02:11:13 UTC

So glad you enjoy it.
:)

Thanks.

pomavera February 12 2008, 18:44:34 UTC

Oh this verse should be made into a movie! Suspense, drama, friendship and romance...I love it so much I cannot express it. And wow, the scene with Jared and Jensen, touching their foreheads, the sweetest thing ever. Jensen shaving and his monologue about his reflection and sorrow flapping its wings and fly away were so poetic I want to hug him close.

Can't wait for Jared to come home to Jensen...and see him all smooth and clean. Every update is like a breath of fresh air to me. Thank you!

ladyjanelly February 13 2008, 03:32:16 UTC

Heh. I see it as a movie with different named characters with Jensen and Jared and Jeff playing their roles. If that makes sense.
I'm thrilled that you like it that much. It's awesome to write and I'm glad it's as much fun to read.

When I set Jensen-muse free he comes up with lines that surprise even me, and that's the coolest thing for me as a writer.

tabaqui February 12 2008, 18:56:10 UTC

Ah, boys. I love the little moment of stillness between them, when they're both just unhappy and wanting some connection.
*hugs them*

And of *course* Jeff could keep the crowd from getting too rowdy. Yay!

ladyjanelly February 13 2008, 03:35:13 UTC

Oh, boys. I wanted to give them more happy, but Jared had stuff to do.

I love Jeff so much I keep writing in scenes and lines for him even when I don't need them. But then they're making their own plot, so it's all good.

Glad you enjoyed it.