Comments | ladyhyacinth: The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock

ladyhyacinth

The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock

May 03, 2006 11:20

S'io credesse che mia risposta fosse
A persona che mai tornasse al mondo,
Questa fiamma staria senza piu scosse.
Ma per cio che giammai di questo fondo
Non torno viva alcun, s'i'odo il vero,
Senza tema d'infamia ti rispondoYou know and I know.. and its this feeling that I can't define and its these words that don't form, or the fluidity of colour ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

engine571 May 3 2006, 01:43:22 UTC

i've missed your words, it's nice to see you again

ladyhyacinth May 3 2006, 07:29:19 UTC

Thankyou :)

As is you.

sykobritt May 3 2006, 14:31:22 UTC

I love this... it's so moving and powerful...you're awesome, I'm glad I count you as a friend!!!

ladyhyacinth May 4 2006, 10:57:03 UTC

Thankyou, your comment is really appreciated.

porcelain_ocean May 3 2006, 20:44:33 UTC

I <3 Prufrock poem. I actually used it in a short story until my short story teacher said the only way it would work is if my story turned into a novel. :'(

ladyhyacinth May 4 2006, 10:58:24 UTC

Yeah its good eh, but for me its always The Hollow Men and Wasteland then Prufrock.

Thing I love about poetry is you can read it so many times and yet still see something new that you missed the first, second, fifth time round.

How long did the short story end up being?