Fields of Poppies, Little Pearls.

Mar 19, 2006 15:05

Seconal, Spanish fly, Absinthe, Kerosene..Communicate with me, against and soaking into skin, communicate against hair to wove through the strands the beauty of language, elucidate what you want to say in the crook of my elbow, into soft flesh that flexs under the veins, whisper and write words along my arms downwards on to the inner palm.. over ( Read more... )

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annietopia March 19 2006, 06:09:40 UTC
I like this one! Wrote it up in 5 minutes? Impressive! I like this part...

Communicate with me with eyes and mouth, small nuances of natural behaviour, dig your fingers deep under my ribs to search out the words hidden inside

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ladyhyacinth March 19 2006, 06:13:19 UTC
Thanks :)

Yeah five minutes lol.. I just came back now and made a couple minor adjustments to make it flow easier.

My favourite bit is this "...write on your back everything that I would whisper into your ear so you would carry a reminder everywhere you walk, communicate in ink, and tone..."

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kateylouise March 19 2006, 09:30:41 UTC
Communication is such a beautifully thing, because of all of the forms it takes.
Lovely.

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kateylouise March 19 2006, 09:30:53 UTC
*beautiful.

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ladyhyacinth March 19 2006, 09:40:03 UTC
Thankyou :)

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