(fic) An Office (As postulated by Schrödinger) (team angst)

[ladygray99]

Title: An Office (As postulated by Schrödinger) (team angst)
Author: ladygray99 
Pairing/Characters: Don
Rating/Category: PG, Gen, pre-show
Spoilers: Identity Crisis 1.08
Summary: Don is like a cat in a box and he’s tired of wondering if he’s alive or dead.
Notes: For some reason these numb3rswriteoff  fics keep coming out gen. I would like feedback since this is a little

Comments

[spikedluv]

Great job! The last line was very powerful, and I can see how 'that girl' might have been part of the catalyst that let Don make the decision when he did.

[ladygray99]

Yeah, but Don's never going to admit it.

[chymom]

Hey this was great. I love how you have Don even there taking contorl of things around him. I have read some were that Don is a born leader. You are just showing how right that person(s) are. Thanks for sharing.

[ladygray99]

Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it.

[1trackmind]

I really liked this. I can see Don admitting how bad things are before anyone else does and I like the comparison with Schrodinger. The last line is great!

[ladygray99]

Thanks, I always struggle with last lines.

[devon99]

Really nicely written. I enjoyed this a lot. It flowed beautifully and had a fabulous final line.

[ladygray99]

Thanks. I always feel it's important to nail last lines.

[jlm110108]

Wow! That was wonderful. You did a great job of capturing the emotion and the cat.

Jo

[ladygray99]

Thanks. I always thought there was something a little cat like about Don.