Comments | ladygray99: Winchester, Idaho (3/7)

ladygray99

Winchester, Idaho (3/7)

Jan 13, 2010 07:08

Title: Winchester, Idaho (3/7)
Author: ladygray99
Pairing: Charlie/Colby
Rating: PG13
Warnings: on screen animal hunting
Word count: 6,540
Summery: It’s the 4th of July and after almost 20 years Colby is heading home to Winchester, Idaho. And he’s bringing his husband and daughter with him.
Spoilers: Toxin, Janus List, Trust Metric, Counterfeit ( Read more... )

fandom: numb3rs, vignettes, pairing: charlie/colby, rating: pg13, fic

Comments 12

kimboosan January 12 2010, 18:17:44 UTC

I'm reading this! Only I just cracked part one yesterday. Will be catching up on it through the week, and commenting. Just wanted you to know. ♥

ladygray99 January 12 2010, 18:21:40 UTC

:-)
*HUGS*

batgurl10 January 12 2010, 20:41:29 UTC

OhOh, wow. I am so enjoying this. THANK U for writing it!~ I must admit to not being a fan of a lot of pairings u have, but this one and WHITMAN are my true FAVES!

Great read, and Esther is such a well thought out character--not mary sue at all. Love her interaction with the Granger clan. I noticed theres not a lot of charlie here...was that on purpose/? also,,, do he and colby ever "Do it?" lOL. :-)

ladygray99 January 13 2010, 04:53:13 UTC

Glad you're reading and like this. Charlie will be more active later but I really wanted the story to be about Colby coming home and facing his family. As for Charlie and Colby doing it. Well.... You'll just have to keep reading.

lillyg January 13 2010, 01:07:32 UTC

“Thank you for the very kind offer,” Esther said quickly. “But getting dunked in potentially religious water was on the list of things I promised my rabbi I’d try to avoid while venturing into the wilderness. That and pickled pigs feet. Those actually exist, right? Nice coffee by the way. Not over done.”

That part killed me! As much as the pastor!

ladygray99 January 13 2010, 04:54:22 UTC

:-) Good to know.

riverotter1951 January 13 2010, 15:47:17 UTC

Bravo, bravo, bravo. I like Colby's family and the insights into his character and upbringing.

ladygray99 January 13 2010, 18:00:14 UTC

Thank you. I didn't want to make his family just cardboard cut out hicks and tried to give them all slightly different ways of looking at the world.

boymommytotwo January 14 2010, 06:29:14 UTC

"affronted"... yeah.

and what an UNFORTUNATE church service! poor esther, poor andrew... poor colby!

but this made the ::snort:: actually travel up the backside of my nose and squeek out my eyeballs: “They tried to baptize me.”

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and the rest was just so painfully beautiful. oh, my heart is breaking for colby!

exquisite, my dear...

ladygray99 January 15 2010, 02:34:57 UTC

Colby and Esther's fight was originally supposed to happen at church but I found I had to get them out of there more quickly than I originally anticipated.