Keeping Her Secret - Part 3/End

[ladygizarme]

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[fopperies]

Oh my god oh my god oh my god.
I don't even. ♥

I don't even read Naturo fanfiction anymore, and this just blew my mind and made me forget why. I'll be honest, I rarely expect anything from a genderbender, and I don't know what drew me to the premise in the first place, but I'm deliriously glad that it did. Jesus, this was amazing. I. ffffff. ♥

I can't even pinpoint what I love the most. I think it's that Sasuke has all of her girl parts, but remains Sasuke in a way that transcends gender. Naruto is amazing, and not the joke people can make him into. And their relationship, wow. You're fantastic, this is beautiful, and is it bad that I want this to be like--the entire manga? ;__; I'm satisfied and aching for more, all at once. You've reminded me why this fandom was so important to me, and of all the ways I love Sasuke-- male, female, and all of the above.

Srsly, I can't convey to you how bizarre it is that I read this. And loved it so, so much. I haven't touched the Naruto fandom for two years, even though it's on my flist...and, I

[ladygizarme]

Wow, thank you so much! I feel a lot better about this after reading your comments. =)

I've always favored a dominant, toppy!Sasuke. And by favored, I mean that I never read anything else. And I love that Sasuke still was dominant and toppy, she just had breasts as well.

LOL, I kept noticing that I was doing that, and found it more than a bit funny. Though I write both, I generally prefer Naruto on top when it comes to smut, but with Sasuke a girl here it seemed only natural for her to top. XD (it could also be that it's pre-timeskip!Sasuke, though)

Thanks again for such glowing comments! Guhh, I can't even begin to tell you how nervous I felt about this.

[pervert_bitch]

Oh yes, oh hell yes. Best fic I have read of all the sasunaru kink meme... and damn they were some fucking AWESOME ones. I love how Sasuke is still Sasuke but also female. So very female. But also just Sasuke XD
And Naruto. So Naruto. Totally IC.
And damn, damn, damn that ending... *sniff*

[ladygizarme]

*dies blushing from flattery* Thank you! Wow, your comment leaves me happily speechless. =)

The ending made me cry. It wouldn't let me make it happy. There's something wrong with me lol

[kumo]

I... Oh m....

*breathes*

Not gonna lie, I was waiting for this when I saw the request at the comm. *has a bit of a femme!Sasu fetish, shhhhh* But this is way, way better than anything I could've expected. Sasuke's character was spot-on. I love that she was still Sasuke despite the different equipment. But the best part's gotta be the tension between them. It's every bit the passionate push-pull dynamic that made me fall for SNS in the first place.

Oh yea and the porn. It just seemed inevitable. And hot. It could be a short film and win awards. (It's late and I'm not making any sense)

So if you DECIDE TO CONTINTUE (hint), I won't complain. ;D

[ladygizarme]

Thank you so much for your comments. I'm glad you think I was able to capture their relationship dynamics well. That's definitely what made me fall for them, also.

*also has a bit of a femme!Sasu fetish--or a SasuNaru genderbender fetish in general* >_> so you're not alone lol

[faorism]

Okay.

Sooooo. femme! is one of my all time squicks (although I have written one recently...) but this was absolutely spectacular. Absolutely, tremendously spectacular. I am in awe that something so bloody wonderful could come as a result of a meme I made on a whim. I mean, you made het sex seem sexy (and to a little queer like me, that is an accomplishment). Like, just flipping amazing.

I'm sorry if this was in the fiction, and I totally blanked out about it: why exactly was Sasuke hiding her identity? Was she actually some sort of transgender/gender queer (which is how I imagine it, but I'm curious as to what it actually is)?

[ladygizarme]

Het is actually a squick of mine usually LOL. I write way too much sex for an asexual person, really, and het IRL is just bleh but... I'm also big on freedom of expression of sexual/gender identity, and bending the rules of society concerning them. And also... when it's Sasuke and Naruto I just don't care what they are, as long as they're them.

As for Sasuke's reasons... they weren't blatantly explained in the fic. I had planned to, but I realized about halfway through that I'd written it entirely from Naruto's perspective and it wouldn't really fit because I just couldn't see Sasuke giving him straight-up answers. So I decided it was okay to be a little ambiguous and leave Naruto and the reader a bit confused

[pervert_bitch]

Man, I am glad it was kinda Sasuke's decision and not a "Lady Oscar" (of Versailles No Bara) situation ... So Itachi called "imouto" before? :P

[ladygizarme]

"Are you ready to go, imouto?" Itachi called, walking into his little sister's room.

When he got there, he stopped short, surprised at the level of anger in his little sister's normally-cute pout. A dark eyebrow rose as he examined the 4-year-old. Her little arms were crossed over her chest and her hair that their mother normally put in two little pigtails was free and messy, sticking up at the back like Sasuke had had to fight with the small rubberbands normally there.

She was also naked, but for the underwear she was wearing.

"Sasuke, what are you still doing undressed? I thought kaa-san dressed you already."

If possible, that not-quite-cute pout got even more venomous.

"I'm not wearing that stupid dressItachi caught sight of the poor abandoned dress--a soft purple colored one, now ripped to shreds by the sharp kunai Sasuke had just been permitted to trade for her toy ones

[yuuko_uchiha]

sweet mother of everything that is hot (<-XD)

I love this... I really really love this
Sasuke is so~~~ gods! the way he is, and that even him being a her he is still the same, he teases Naruto he competes with him, she keeps her gound even when Naruto finds out, the way Sasuke tops from the bottom was delicious

now I need a cold shower

[ladygizarme]

Yay, I'm glad you liked it! *happy to be the cause of needing a cold shower XD*