Comments | ladygizarme: Keeping Her Secret

ladygizarme

Keeping Her Secret - Part 2

Oct 11, 2009 19:04

!angst, !genderbender, sasunaru_kink, !trans/questioning character, !smut, pairing: naruto x sasuke, !uneducated/uninformed pov, !underage, love: het, naruto fanfiction, character: sasuke, fandom: naruto, character: naruto, !fluff, fanfiction

Comments 8

faorism October 12 2009, 02:42:37 UTC

Just needed to say: ROFLMAO TO THE SLOBBER!!!

ladygizarme October 12 2009, 03:20:40 UTC

LMFAO I FORGOT I WROTE THAT! I wrote that part like a week ago. XD

citrine59 October 12 2009, 20:15:06 UTC

This was quite believable and not to mention hot! I generally don't like genderbenders but this was really cute, and awkward in that adolescent way and I felt Sasuke didn't lose his toughness despite being you a girl XD LOL @ "Take off the bandage. Let me see..."

ladygizarme October 12 2009, 22:01:32 UTC

lol thanks, glad you enjoyed it even though it's a genderbender. ^_^ I hope you went on to read part 3, too.

citrine59 October 12 2009, 22:54:30 UTC

Yes I did! I like Sasuke as a pushy bottom! nngh so hot~ Your writing flows so well. You left the end open for interpretation, I guess; and that's how I like it.

At first, I hadn't noticed there was a part three, and then I was like, 'it cannot end here coz it seems incomplete' so I went back to see if there was another part and the link was right there, in the bottom...I'm such a flake *major head-desk*

ladygizarme October 12 2009, 23:28:41 UTC

LOL glad you found it. ^^

Thank you for the compliment, too. I'm glad you liked it, even the end. :)

Sasuke as a pushy bottom is one of my favs ^^;

venia October 14 2009, 08:44:08 UTC

I haven't read part 3 yet, but I want to comment now before enthusiasm makes me too incoherent:D Eeeh you're a great author!
I think I needed a fic like that. It's hard to find this type of plot so succesfully written. I winced whenever I read 'her' or 'she' refferred to him, but I got used in the end and in a sort of twisted way it makes perfect sense for Sasuke to be a girl.XD I like that you keep him in character without making him go all girly suddenly, and I like that they are underage bwahahah! not because of pedophilism tendencies (as a fangirl I'm perverted enough not to need this label) but rather because a still inexperienced Naruto is much better than a sex guru so often seen in fics, and besides things come naturally, instead of 'omg she's a girl, let's jump straight to sex!; scene. So yeah...although you can't write too much smut -which is perfectly understandable- I'm not dissapointed at all. I hope the rest of the fic is as nice as this part :3

ladygizarme October 14 2009, 16:13:20 UTC

It was nice writing a more inexperienced Naruto, and definitely easier to do without making him completely naive since this is pre-timeskip. ^^ Making them jump straight to sex, especially at this age, I just couldn't do it.. that's kinda how the plot came about in the first place. lol

I'm glad you liked it.

As for girl!Sasuke.. lol, while writing this, I commented to my friend, "I've been writing so fast on this, sometimes I stop and think, 'oh crap, I've probably written he/him/his all over the place instead of she/her/hers!' but when I look.. I don't see any. I've been writing a lot of girl!Sasuke lately, lol. Now it just comes naturally?"