A Persistent Illusion - Harvest fic

Nov 02, 2010 10:09



Title: The Persistent Illusion
Rating: R, mostly light NC17
Summary: A series of moments from “Harvest”, onscreen and Offscreenville.
Word Count: 3075

And then one day A magic day he passed my way And while we spoke of many things Fools and kings This he said to me )

tv: smallville, rated r, single shot, character: clark kent, pairing: clark/lois, character: lois lane, nc17

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ladygawain November 2 2010, 23:45:52 UTC
Thank you, Sarin, your encouragement and feedback is greatly treasured.

I hope you're well too, *glomps*

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ladygawain November 2 2010, 23:47:59 UTC
Thank you, Paloma, just this couple -- what even, right? Thank you very much for taking the time to leave feedback, so valued, and I'm SO glad the style wasn't off-putting or anything :)

*hugs*

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chrisluvstommy November 3 2010, 00:48:26 UTC
So, I've read this like 3 times, just to soak in all the sexy goodness.

You know I have a soft spot for Clark speaking Kryptonian and I loved how you incorporated it into this story.

It was sweet and sensual just a lovely lovely fic Maggie Thank you

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ladygawain November 3 2010, 20:01:26 UTC
Yay!!!! I'm so glad you liked it. This is one instance where I'm with Lois, any time I hear a man speak a language other than English, and saying the things I imagine Clark is saying, the way he was saying them... my panties are set on fire.

Thank you muchly, twinnie :)

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tiva_clois November 3 2010, 01:18:46 UTC
loved this! i loved the style of it, and by no means was your dialogue stupid. very well done!

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ladygawain November 3 2010, 20:01:56 UTC
Thank you very much, I always worry on that front, so SO relieved that it worked.

Thanks for stopping by :)

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emerald_night November 3 2010, 02:18:12 UTC
I was just saying I want Clark to translate some of that Kryptonian in the journal for her on the show.

But now you've made me want him SPEAKING it! DAMN!

So lovely. And hot.

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ladygawain November 3 2010, 20:03:04 UTC
Oh, the things I would do to see Clark actually speaking Kryptonian aren't even legal! XD

I wonder what it sounds like?

Thanks, m'dear :)

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