Parental Discretion is Advised.....again

Mar 24, 2011 21:29


Title: Welcome To The Machine chapter 6
Author: lady diskette
A/N: Thank you for the views and comments people, I am so glad you guys like this story so far. I don't own the TGTWG's people or their characters, internet personas, etc. I don't own Justin Timberlake's “Carry Out” song nor do I own Dave Matthew's “Gravedigger”. Or Johnny Cash (or any ( Read more... )

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nuttersinc March 25 2011, 20:46:51 UTC
This is a brilliant story. You're a really good writer. I would say I'm enjoying reading it but I think that would be the wrong thing to say about a story like this. In fact I'm pretty sure it makes me a masechist reading this story as I love the characters and am horrified by the things that are happening to them but I think that shows how good a writer you are as you make me care about them.
For some reason I can't read chapter 5. It just keeps saying access denied. I'm new to livejournal so I don't know if I'm doing anything wrong or if it's blocked on purpose. If I can't read it for any reason, could you give me a summary of the chapter? Keep writing because I need to read more of this.
Thanks for writing this brilliant fic.
(thanks for aceepting me as a friend)

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ladydiskette March 25 2011, 23:09:07 UTC
Thanks you so much, I also have them posted on a TGWTG_fic community the reason I posted this particular chapter was because of the length of the post.

I appreciate your comment and I will see what I can do for chapter five. Its basically a filler chapter where Mecha has homicidal thoughts as he is "preparing dinner" for his prisoners, Nostalgia Critic makes a promise to Marzgurl to watch over FB if anything happens to her, and Spoony talks to Linkara about what happened at the end of chapter four involving Cinema Snob.

And I will definitely keep writing. Thank you.

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yersi_fanel March 26 2011, 04:14:10 UTC
That was heartbreaking! I'm seriously waiting to rip apart Mechakara, aww, damn! I'm reaching the point of disliking a villain so much that I just want justice! And that is a very good thing you know, because I means your writing is hitting the nail, you write, I react, then you did it good!

I'm officially giving you a Rob Zombie apprentice pin now, missy!

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ladydiskette March 26 2011, 04:20:55 UTC
Oh yays! *puts it next to her "I am Evil" pin :D

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timidfox March 28 2011, 20:05:16 UTC
Late comment is late, but you already know what I think of this ^_~

Commenting here for both of them. I adore how you finally wrote Mecha glitching, how Paw was too tramaizied/lost at the thoguht of whats happened to the others.

The Todd/Lupa part was beautiful, can't really say anything about mechakara on this one can I 0:)

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ladyhadhafang April 8 2011, 21:39:55 UTC
0.0.

Oh God...poor Lupa... *Hugs*

That was really interesting nonetheless! :D

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ladydiskette April 8 2011, 22:36:40 UTC
Awww thank you....*hugs back* Don't worry though, I am not going to leave Todd out in the cold. I am bound and determined to make them share a last moment together the right and romantic way in the next chapter :D

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ladyhadhafang April 8 2011, 22:54:01 UTC
Can't wait! :D

*Crosses fingers and waits patiently* ^__^

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