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ladydeathfaerie

Coming Clean

Jul 22, 2010 21:07

Title: Coming Clean
Universe: Marvel, specifically the Supervillainess branch
Pairing: none, really
Rating: mature. lots of swearing.
Word Count: 11,574
Disclaimer: i do not own any of the Marvel-ous men contained within this fic. they are all owned by Marvel and whoever the hell else owns them. i'm not making any money off this. just writing for ( Read more... )

character: steve rogers/captain america, character: omc, fandom: supervillainess, character: kiera colborn/chill, universe: marvel, character: clint barton/hawkeye/ronin, character: mystery/flare, subject: fan fiction

Comments 7

dazzledfirestar July 23 2010, 03:56:13 UTC

That was awesome, hun. :) I laughed, I d'awwed. Every note was lovely!

You know it had to come out eventually, right? lol I think you handled it very well, given the complete clusterfuck of a situation it was.

Great work hun. :) That's one more thing off the "You can TOO write Marvel" check list. ;) LOL

ladydeathfaerie July 23 2010, 04:26:52 UTC

thanks, sweetie. i was not quite so sure. but i'm glad you enjoyed it. i was trying really hard to deal with the anger and confusion on one side while hitting the confusion and fear on the other. Mystery kept having other ideas.

yeah. i supppose it had to come out. Steve isn't stupid. he'd have figured it out eventually. especially if Hank Pym asked her about her different powers. "Oh, yeah. I can shape shift into just about any person I want to." that would have gone over well.

i'm glad it came out okay. i had some serious doubts there. i'm still really unsure where Steve is concerned.

strawberispring July 23 2010, 03:59:22 UTC

I'm not particularly up to speed on this 'verse but damn I enjoyed this. It was very emotionally charged. :D

ladydeathfaerie July 23 2010, 04:30:26 UTC

i've actually had more bunnies for the post-SV than the actual main timeline. my brain hates me, i think.

this actually ties into another piece i wrote called Something More, which goes into the previous relationship mentioned here.

thanks for reading it. i'm so glad you enjoyed it.

strawberispring July 23 2010, 04:38:51 UTC

Guh, I know how that goes. Way too many ideas past the actual story and in AUs and blaaargh.

De nada.

ginevrasm July 24 2010, 04:35:35 UTC

Excellent work as usual, hon. Keep this up and you'll turn me in to a Captain Fucking America fan.

I've sooo got to get back into the fic groove again. Sigh... I can barely find time to read any, much less write.

ladydeathfaerie July 24 2010, 05:21:40 UTC

thank you. glad you enjoyed it. this one tickled at my brain for a while and all kinds of scenarios went through my head. i finally picked one and i like to think it was the best of the bunch.