Comments | ladydeathfaerie: Pandora's Box, Chapter Three

ladydeathfaerie

Pandora's Box, Chapter Three

Jan 29, 2008 22:02

well, i've finally managed to pull this one out of..... where ever it comes from. hopefully, Gin will like it. it kind of went weird there so..... *sighs* we'll see.

Title: Pandora's Box
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: adult, mature. no one under 18. not even with a parent. no smut for you kiddies.
Warnings: sex, language, possible violence at some ( Read more... )

fiction: trade fic, character: pandora vitale, fiction: mail order bride, universe: harry potter, character: ofc, character: severus snape, universe: harry potter au, subject: fan fiction, character: lucius malfoy

Comments 7

You are a wicked, wicked, woman! ginevrasm January 30 2008, 04:56:36 UTC

I love it.

What an interesting twist. Oh my...

Worth the wait. Dora's in way over her head.

And I'm grinning like a fool.

Re: You are a wicked, wicked, woman! ladydeathfaerie January 30 2008, 05:01:55 UTC

me? wicked? would i do something like that? *adjusts the halo to hide the horns*

seriously, sweetie. i'm glad you liked it. and yes, Dora is in over her head.

dazzledfirestar January 30 2008, 05:03:16 UTC

Oh my! That was lovely! So I'm not the only one that hears that voice in my dreams? lol

What is Lucius up to? Was Dora the only one feeling those... effects? Oh the tension is mounting... no pun intended! lol Great job, as always!

ladydeathfaerie January 30 2008, 05:08:03 UTC

thank you, Daz. glad you liked it.

Lucius wasn't actually up to much of anything. and, if you recall, he did have to sit down.... *evil grin*

nanaeanaven January 30 2008, 15:36:12 UTC

Read it last night before a went to bed - big mistake. lol A very interesting twist ... I also wondered just how - involved - Lucius was in that dreamy spell.

Now, I can tell you struggled with this chapter because I noticed a few typos - which is unusual for you. If you want I can go back over it and find them again. Just let me know.

ladydeathfaerie January 30 2008, 15:50:29 UTC

of course you're welcome to go back over it and point anything out. i did put it through a spell check, so..... dunno what i missed.

and it seems to be the general consensus that it probably shouldn't have been read last night. hell, after i was done writing it, i was thinking much along the same lines. *sighs*

i need a man....

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Re: Sweet Dreams Are Made Of This... ladydeathfaerie January 30 2008, 19:32:36 UTC

glad you liked it, hon.

here's hoping the rest is as good as what's come before....