Pandora's Box: Chapter Two

[ladydeathfaerie]

so, ladies and.... erm.... gents? we find ourselves once more caught up in my trade fic. i've just finished Chapter Two of Pandora's Box and offer it for your consideration. this one isn't quite as funny as Chapter One was, but they can't all be funny. Dora's been having some seriously deep thoughts about what she's doing and we find out here why

Comments

[dazzledfirestar]

Now it makes sense! I couldn't help but wonder why an intelligent, beautiful woman would put herself on the auction block. lol It's a lovely chapter, and I can't wait to see the reaction to Lucius being married! hehehehe *evil grin*

[ladydeathfaerie]

i'm glad you enjoyed it, Daz. and i'm glad you understand what's going on.

there are other reasons for her actions. but those will come out at a later time..... there is much mystery to Dora. i promise.

Another great installment....

[ginevrasm]

I love this...I can almost hear the children turning the pages in their books.

This chapter was as touching as the first was funny. I shall try very hard to wait patiently for another chapter.

Poor Dora...Such surprises are in store for her....

Umm...Chocolate Frogs and Butterbeer all around! A toast to the coming nuptuals!

Thank you again, LDF. Lovely.

Re: Another great installment....

[ladydeathfaerie]

*scarfs the chocolate frog before chugging the butter beer.* i'm glad you liked it, sweetie. i know its taking me forever to be productive. and i apologize for that. but i promise i'll make up for it with lots of hot smut.

i know i can deliver on that. *looks at the Muses milling about and drools* oh, yeah. i can deliver on that

Re: Another great installment....

[dazzledfirestar]

Cheers! *drains butter beer from pint glass* *hiccup* May I have another please? lol

*Grabs a butterbeer and guzzles it down*

[nanaeanaven]

Wonderful atmosphere - I felt like I was right there alongside of Dora, watching everything unfold. The little boy, Marco, was so sweet, nice touch. But why did you have to end it with a cliffhanger? *sobs* You know I have precious little patience. lol

I'm sure my husband will be happy to come and visit, too," she assured him. *snort* Snape? Yeah, right. Like that will ever happen. lol

Re: *Grabs a butterbeer and guzzles it down*

[ladydeathfaerie]

i couldn't help it. had to add that bit. that whole part with the kids was kind of hard and fun to write. her telling them what he looked like.. and that he liked kids..... *giggles*

i'm glad you liked it, Nan. i'm sure Gin will keep me on track so that there's a chapter again this coming weekend. she's good at that.

Re: Sweet!

[ladydeathfaerie]

glad you liked it, sweetie.

now let's see if i can keep it up.