Draw Your Bow Across the Strings of My Heart

May 21, 2012 14:02

Title: Draw Your Bow Across the Strings of My Heart, Part Two
Fandom: Marvel, the Movie branch
Rating: adult
Warnings: mostly language, but there is a hint of self-destruction running through the story, as well as mentions of character death. also, there are spoilers for the movie in here, so if you haven't seen the film, proceed with caution.
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universe: marvel movie, character: thor, fandom: avengers, character: bruce banner/the hulk, character: steve rogers/captain america, character: tony stark/iron man, character: nick fury, character: agent phil coulson, character: clint barton/hawkeye/ronin, character: natasha romanova/black widow, subject: fan fiction

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dave2380 May 21 2012, 21:46:58 UTC
Oh gods above, make me cry why don't you. You have me sitting in a corner blubbing now, this was so gods damned beautiful.

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ladydeathfaerie May 21 2012, 22:12:41 UTC
i am so sorry i made you cry. i seem to be doing quite a bit of that here lately. but i'm so glad you found it beautiful. i'm still in a bit of awe about the response i've gotten to this fic.

thanks so much for reading and i'm so glad you enjoyed!

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animesiren May 21 2012, 23:51:30 UTC
Very, very touching.

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ladydeathfaerie May 21 2012, 23:57:23 UTC
thank you. and thank you so much for reading.

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hils May 22 2012, 12:07:50 UTC
I literally sobbed all the way through this! But that's a testament to how well it was written because fics don't usually make me cry

Kudos!

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ladydeathfaerie May 22 2012, 17:19:00 UTC
if i were the keymashing sort, i'd totally be keymashing about now. you guys! the reception to this piece has been far more than what i expected and i'm just... guh. there are no words.

i'm so glad you enjoyed this, even if it did make you cry and sob and get all snotty. thanks so much for reading, hils!

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moonrose91 May 23 2012, 21:09:57 UTC
*is a sobbing mess of depression*

This was beautiful! You made me cry!

I don't cry easily!

*goes back to sobbing over the beauty of this fic*

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ladydeathfaerie May 23 2012, 21:15:05 UTC
i truly am sorry about that. i've apparently been making lots of people cry here lately. something about this one...

seriously, though. thank you for taking the time to read it and i'm glad you enjoyed it.

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moonrose91 May 23 2012, 21:19:27 UTC
It is a good thing because it is just so heart-breaking.

*sniffles*

And Clark Gregg and Joss Wheadon lied...even after the movie!

*still sobbing*

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ladydeathfaerie May 23 2012, 23:27:32 UTC
to be honest, i kind of cranked it out in about 24 hours, so i was sure it was crap. i have been told otherwise.

i'll go back and read it one day and find out what everyone is talking about.

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hogwartshoney May 30 2012, 00:34:51 UTC
MASSIVE amount of tears, oh my god.
This was lovely, from start to finish, just lovely

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ladydeathfaerie May 30 2012, 00:42:47 UTC
there were so many tears. i got so many comments involving people crying. i am truly sorry for that.

i am not sorry, however, that you enjoyed the story. thank you so much for reading!

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hogwartshoney May 30 2012, 01:10:51 UTC
No! Don't be sorry about the tears - you wrote Clint's loss and grief and sorrow perfectly. I loved it most because I'd imagine that most of your readers have dealt with loss at some point in their lives, and I think that everyone could relate.

And...... I wanted to tell you that you had me in the first 2 paragraphs... your descriptions of Clint playing and Phil watching - I found it beautiful and it really set the place, y'know? I felt as though I was there, easily seeing what Phil saw.

Just lovely. Still teary-eyed, but in a good way :)

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ladydeathfaerie May 30 2012, 02:26:43 UTC
it pleases me to no end to know that you just... saw it. because that's something i want my readers to have. the feeling that they're there in the story. not just reading it, but an actual part of it.

i still have images of Clint with the cello between his thighs even now. i kind of want to write more. but i don't know if there's more to write.

thank you again. and thanks so much for reading.

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