Comments | ladydeathfaerie: Surprises, part 5

ladydeathfaerie

Surprises, part 5

Aug 04, 2011 23:44

Title: Surprises
Fandoms: the Marvel Universe, specifically the Supervillainess branch
Rating: no one under 18. lots of sex.
Warning: mostly just sex. some language.
Disclaimer: i do not own anyone from the Marvel universe. all recognizable characters and shit belong to Marvel and anyone else who owns them. Kiera belongs to dazzledfirestar . ( Read more... )

character: steve rogers/captain america, character: tony stark/iron man, fandom: supervillainess, character: johnny storm/human torch, character: kiera colborn/chill, character: ofc, idea: mary sue virus, universe: marvel au, character: clint barton/hawkeye/ronin, character: mystery/flare, universe: merry gentry, subject: fan fiction

Comments 4

strawberispring August 5 2011, 05:33:42 UTC

This was v. good and an interesting, different take on things. I'm still not 100% familiar with this 'verse although I've read a few fics posted on here and get the general gist.

ladydeathfaerie August 5 2011, 06:01:43 UTC

thanks for reading, hon. hope you enjoyed.

dazzledfirestar August 6 2011, 05:05:19 UTC

You did a beautiful job with a nasty situation across the board! Bravo, hun! Seriously, lovely! The conversation about how the feelings "Sarah" had for Steve were Mystery's was so perfect and Kiera freaking out... ah! I love the whole thing!

Excellent work! :D

ladydeathfaerie August 6 2011, 15:42:55 UTC

i'm glad it all worked for you, honey. i'm still kind of steamed that i had to rewrite the entire scene with Mystery and Steve in the NICU but i guess what came out worked. i kind of thought what i'd had before was better but... eh. what can you do?

seriously, sweetie. glad you enjoyed. i have to admit that i had lots of fun writing it.