Comments | ladydeathfaerie: The House of the Rising Sun, Chapter Twelve

ladydeathfaerie

The House of the Rising Sun, Chapter Twelve

Jun 13, 2011 23:45

Title: House of the Rising Sun
Fandoms: a cross over between Marvel's X-Men(to some degree) Universe and the Anita Blake Universe
Rating: no one under 18. there will be blood and gore, sex and violence. dirty language and whatever else i feel like tossing in here.
Warning: as i said, sex and violence and dirty words. said sex will include, but ( Read more... )

character: asher, character: jason schuyler, character: jo, character: amanda, character: remy lebeau/gambit, character: gin, universe: marvel, character: kimberly, universe: anita blake, character: jean claude, character: susan, fiction: crossover, subject: fan fiction

Comments 9

dazzledfirestar June 14 2011, 21:53:30 UTC

Oooooh! Can't wait to see how the party goes! Jo is going to be in SO MUCH trouble! >.<

Love the way you handled this, hun. The layer of tension from being apart between the three of them is lovely. The way they're all settling in... though it seems Remy's having a harder time with it than the girls. Very interesting!

Again, great work! :)

ladydeathfaerie June 14 2011, 23:27:02 UTC

yeah. been tossing ideas for the party around in my head all day. she will be in such trouble. that should be such fun.

the tension has no doubt been building into something hard to deal with. and i think the girls have it easier in the fact that they're surrounded by people they've let in as friends. Remy's kind of odd man out. so... dunno. we'll see how it all goes.

glad you enjoyed, sweetie.

nanaeanaven June 15 2011, 03:42:11 UTC

If there was one thing Remy was good at, it was charming the pants off of people. -- ain't that the truth? lol Poor JC is in for a world of trouble.

Lovely work, hun! Quite a bit of nummieness in there too. *wipes at drool*

ladydeathfaerie June 15 2011, 04:15:40 UTC

yes. Jean Claude is in for a world of trouble, isn't he? Remy's such a handful. the man has no clue...

thanks, honey. glad you enjoyed. yes. there was some yummy stuff in there.

ginevrasm June 15 2011, 04:02:21 UTC

Ooh! Yum. I love the note of tension at the end and the way relationships are building. The party sounds like it's going to be a blast. I'll be looking forward to reading it.

Good stuff!

ladydeathfaerie June 15 2011, 04:16:50 UTC

yes. there should be lots of tension popping up here and there. Remy and Jean Claude are going to kind of explode all over one another, i think. the party should be such fun. working on it right now, in fact.

glad you enjoyed.

sessys_fangirl August 29 2011, 08:51:49 UTC

* fans herself * Holy Hannah Hell!!

Damn that was a hot fucking chapter.. I need a shower dammit...Phew! Especially that last part with Remy and JC...Meee-oow baby!!

I can't wait to get to chapter 13 later today.. * grins * But first I must let this stew and seep in my brain so I don't short circuit later!!

ladydeathfaerie August 29 2011, 18:00:05 UTC

glad you liked it, hon.

yes. those two boys are so hot together. SO HOT.

hopefully the next one won't kill brain cells. i don't think it will. might get them riled up a bit, though.

sessys_fangirl August 29 2011, 20:44:15 UTC

* laughs * I think its too late. I don't think I have any brain cells left after this chapter...but now. Onto 13. I can't wait any longer!